This was very sweet :-) I'm not a follower of SG but the introduction to Halloween and the costumes (and hotness!) were very enjoyable even if I wasn't familiar with canon. A few of the word choices sounded like English is not your first language, but it didn't work against the story at all-instead, it felt like the story had a bit of a French accent :-) And the visuals of the action were very clear. I loved the feelings of Dracula's lair being different from the rest of the haunted house. And "terrible meowing of a band of rabid cats" was a great phrase for a scary sound effect!

Loved the description of the Captain's costume, too :-)