,THIS IS AMAZING

Well, this may be one of the only Percy x Octavian stories, and I don't really like Octavian all that much, but this was awesome none the lees. Update when you can. I'd like to see more of this story.

You should continue this story!

you should actually make this a story

What are the rest of Demi-gods reactions?!

Oh my gosh that last sentence had me in giggles! That was a really awesome story!

I just- I loved this SO much! Kudos to you o great one! And have a cookie, they're good for the soul, *whispers* and the mind... (: :) (: :)

Why would I throw tomatoes?! This was great! I love how you ended it, very tasteful.

Awww! ADORABLE! But I still like Percabeth MAYBE a bit better... nah! OCTAVERCY ALL THE WAY! But... that was really detailed on the... sex. Wow. I don't think I really understood it though. Could someone PLEASE explain?!

For the first lemon, you did a great job there. ;)
I liked it. Poor insecure Percy. Though he did realize that he loved Octavian quite fast once the sex was over. xD"
And oh, one has to admire Octavian's self-control, that he lasted that long before pinning Percy against a wall. *nods and grins*
Great oneshot, I really enjoyed it!
Greetings, Phoe

Excuse me, Chrssi, as I go and wash my Doctor Who shirt and clean my floor, there's nose bleed blood everywhere.

I literally couldn't stop grinning after reading this.

Oh the ending XDDDDD

God, I now love this couple :D

This is so cute! Especially Nico's comment in the end!

awesome story!