| Reviews for The Boy Who Wasn't |
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   Lexus Lloyd chapter 3 . 19h but those a canon harry's favorite classes |
| mysuvone chapter 7 . 7/10 hmmm here we go im loving this story |
| mysuvone chapter 6 . 7/10 beautiful anytime dumbledork loses good. |
| mysuvone chapter 5 . 7/10 im loving this very much |
| mysuvone chapter 3 . 7/10 i am loving this story this is first time ive read it |
| mysuvone chapter 1 . 7/10 ohh very nice |
| mumphie chapter 7 . 10/10/2019 Awe - you stopped writing this and didn't let us know the prank. sniff It's a good story, and inventive as is usual with your stories. ;) |
| mumphie chapter 2 . 10/10/2019 I hope Harry can learn how to be a pureblood and Wizarding Etiquette soon so that they can pull off their hoax. |
| Gman310508 chapter 7 . 8/17/2019 You list TBC but when this is such a great story both powerful Neville and Noah as well as the weasly twins has potential for the marauders to be outdone in prancing. What was the potion and what did it do you left this with a cliffhanger. I do hope you take up this story again or rewrite it to completion. Have you completed this story on f.b like other stories you have said you have done if so would you accept my friend request who should I look for on that medium so I can read these stories in total. Keep up the great work that you do. |
| alix33 chapter 7 . 7/9/2019 Yay! at the prospect of Sirius having a trial as soon as Saturday already. I couldn't give a stuff if Peter Pettigrew also gets a trial as long as he's dosed up on veritaserum and tells the truth when he testifies (or maybe he will have to be made to testify?) in Sirius' trial. Yum! at the sound of those huge cups of hot cocoa and biscuits Lee and the Weasley twins got in the kitchens. Did you mean "On the same morning"? |
| alix33 chapter 6 . 7/9/2019 That healing class sounds interesting. "aftereffects" should be one word. The two sets of pranking twins in Gryffindor sound very amusing. No wonder Severus Snape smirked. |
| alix33 chapter 5 . 7/9/2019 Fruit drops sound yummy. Did you mean for the Weasley twins to say "put them into the dessert"? Did you mean for Dumbles to say "an interesting piece of information"? Did you mean for Noah to think that Dumbles' explanations was "long-winded"? |
| alix33 chapter 4 . 7/9/2019 Alice's revenge sounds very cool. I think Frank has an idea somehow what the twins are up to (trying to learn how to become animagi), from that "studious children" joke he made. Cherry wood is such a pretty kind of wood. Neville has good taste, if he already dislikes Ron and Ginny and likes Fred and George more. |
| alix33 chapter 3 . 7/9/2019 Alivce's evil grin made me smile, as did her mischievous smirk later on. Did you mean for Poppy Pomfrey to ask "Is anytihng wrong with the twins?" or "Is anything the matter with the twins?" That birthday dinner for Noah and Neville sounds like fun already. |
| alix33 chapter 2 . 7/9/2019 Good day, Fizzy! I'm hugely chuffed to meet you. I like canny Alice Longbottom. And her husband Frank does not seem like an intellectual slouch either. This twins plan which she suggested and the blood adoption which Frank suggested sound like such good plans. I'm very relieved that Snape agreed to brew the blood adoption potion for the Longbototms and to keep the Longbottoms' secrets regarding Harry. He could so easily have said no, just because he is more than just a tad mean. Bless you, generous Neville, sharing your clothes with Harry until he gets his own. |
