The way you write has me seeing a Coheed and Cambria song in a different light. Wake Up - Coheed and Cambria
Give it a listen, reminds me a lot of your Draco.

And here I’m again, I thought the story had only two parts, and now I noticed there are 4. This isn’t as dark, but it certainly keep the excellence you have in your wiring. This last chapter was… difficult. With that many different POV it was difficult to maintain myself in the thread. Or maybe it is because it’s 3:33 and I should be sleeping. But anyway, I hope the other part expands better about all of those little details that I haven’t receive a conclusion yet, or maybe the answers are there, but my eyes are too tired to notice. Thank you for your excellent work and not so much for stealing my sleep. Have a great day, Charlotte.

Already in part IV! Thank you for continuing this one author!

This story is achingly angsty and so beautifully written. It gives me chills! Thank you for your work and the obvious energy you put into your writing.

I’ve read the other 2 and now this one. I just can’t like it enjoy it understand it. None of it. Hermione is so ooc from the beginning of the first story. I continued to read thinking I would like them but no. Your writing is great it’s just the way you write her as a character. I can believe Draco is a bad guy. A very bad guy but I can’t believe Hermione would be duped by him so early on. Just my 2 cents.

Wonderful.. surprisingly Dark! Very dark, indeed and still wonderful. I fell in love the Draco u made. Evil! Possessive! Draco.
Awww, i guessed u had so much stressed coz of some disagree people, i just wish, u hadn’t. Urs story is xo much perfect for people who like Dark Themes. I just happy, i found urs and i spent 3 days to finish 3 of His series. Thz u xo mux for sharing.

Poor Hermione, don’t you dare give up!

I will concede, however, that the characters did change from the very beginning of My Little Bird (the first one) because they were far more "canon" back then. Starting midway through there and beyond though, Draco became pure evil (how does anyone think he has redeeming qualities?) and watching Hermione's dehumanization was just gut-wrenching. I guess you have successfully horrified me because I'm still thinking about this and frankly regretting I wasted so much of my time reading this. I wish you good luck in the future; maybe writing less graphic, blatantly sensationalist tales will serve you well. I'm done reviewing this.

Ok, I just read shadowfax's review and um ... same. I am not nearly as eloquent, but basically this series was heartwrenching mostly because nothing changed and the characters didn't grow and it was just the same awful sh*t happening again and again for no real reason other than Draco's inane obsession. You, the author, are really quite talented, and this could have been more insightful and less unnecessarily creepy if you had tweaked the story a little. Reading all of those rape scenes was really horrifying. I had no idea people got off to this? Ugh, yikes.

I'm glad I'm done with this story. I don't know whether I'm glad I read it. The best thing I can probably say is, "Thanks, I hate it!"

OH G-D, poor Hermione. I wish she could have killed herself, honestly ... especially before this. I wish she were infertile. I wish she could have an abortion. I hate this.

Sigh. I don't understand why people like this series. There is nothing interesting about his obsession. All we get to see is the same repetitive trash about her trying to escape and failing. I can't believe you'd prefer to waste your writing talents over such an uninspiring story that panders to rape-fantasies of idiotic women. Because let's just admit it right here, his thoughts are so juvenile and too shallow to consider this piece as an insight into depraved minds. There is no depth to anyone's character. It's the same agonizing sentiments again and again to the point where it just simply distresses you to read it. What a waste of my time. I apologize for my flame like comment, and no personal offense to the author, but this is directed towards all those who recommended this story on various websites and in the comments section itself. I do believe the internet is a free space and I reserve the right to express my sentiments over something I spent a considerable time of my day. I'll never it it back will I?

wonderful ending. great wrap up.

Omg, great job i love it, so good. I literally cried in every chapter, because you made Draco so fucking cruel and i loved it. So sad, but amazing. Well Done!

Holy feels, Batman! This whole series has been an angsty and emotional Rollercoaster for me... and I mean that in the best way!