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Posted that early by mistake. Also meant to note that while Helen is electrocuted in 2002 film always wondered if given distance that was the killing element or fire did it. Since you imply you intended to use water (and likely electrocutions) curious how you’ll portray mass electrocutions as 100% fatal or not

Kid if like this. In general like the way the characters get biography information in blurbs even if it’s a bit contrived. You capture some real emotion both before the prom and after it. I feel like the kids in the gym have been thinned out enough and you could go with the rout of more survivors than normal and move onto her attacking the town but get you probably won’t.
Good touch having a lot of people like Morton, Heather and Cindy wounded instead of outright killed. It’s hard to want anyone dead with the bios you give them and the ones left standing whinwere targeted in this chapter have a lot of emotional investment in their survival by now
You did a really good jobs with he interview excerpts
Unusual route in how you made Tina more conflicted than usual (the rabbit is a good touch). Makes it a bit sadder we know she’s doomed from the start.
Would like to request Helen Shyres survival, largely because Chelan s performance as her in the 2002 film was one of the strongest ones there and in a roundabout way the lack of mention of her fate when her mother’s death is brought up arguably implies she lived.

I'm rereading this story for the first time in a couple years, and it remains one of my favorite fanfics to this day. Keep up the good work.

It's completely up to you if you want to continue. Personally, I think it'd be great if you could continue to write your story. Especially since you are so close to finishing. The other fans and I would love to see how the rest of the prom plays out. You may not believe it but you are a super talented writer. Reading your fanfic feels like reading a real book. Your story also seems to have the highest amounts of favorites, follows, and comments so I'm not the only one who recognizes your talents.

It is never to late to start writing again. Please update! I want so badly to see the aftermath. You are an incredible writer.

You are a brilliant writer. I would love to see more from you. I am really interested in reading a story about Ralph and Margareth. Ps what about Margareth’s mother? I thought she was still alive after the prom disaster. What was her reaction/thoughts?

This is an excellent story. You put so much depth within everyone. Carrie, Tina, Chris, and etc. So they weren’t seen as just the bully vs the victim, but actual people in the grey area. I️ hope you finish this!

Too bad the story is on hiatus.

I have some kind of fate with Vicky, Jessica and Emily Bourne

Vicky: maybe she could get blind in one eye and break her arm but managed to escape but live with the guilt for the rest of her life

Jessica: maybe she can be one of the people that escapes through the fire exits but is limping on a broken leg

Emily Bourne: let the arrogant girl die...maybe give her the same fate as Rhonda Simard with being burned alive...?

Those are suggestions for the next chapter: please post soon please

This was a really good story: I like the descriptions that you gave the girls in the books... I just have one question about Kenny's death: in the 2013 remake, wasn't Jackie helping Kenny up before running to the bleachers?... in the script for the 2013 remake, Kenny was described as skinny and the youngest of Billy's gang

I just wanted to let you know that I have enjoyed reading your Fanfic. You are indeed a great writer regarding the genre. Since I'm already here writing this to you,(my 1st review on the site btw!), I will take the opportunity to give you my suggestions/recommendations.
Firstly, many readers have already seen the book/films so they would likely want scenes/visions that haven't been written before.
What I mean is that although Carrie's bio/fate is already known, the audience wants to see the Aftermath. The daily lives and fates of the survivors as well as the reactions of the general public to the story/case of Carrie White.
For example, you can try to picture a scene where Estelle finds out about the massacre and feels regret/guilt for doing nothing to help her former neighbor. You can also try to get into the thoughts of Carrie's former tormentors and how they regret bullying her.
Lastly, I suggest how society would try to prevent another "Carrie tragedy". And also whether or not Christianity would now have a bad reputation due to the disaster.(Erika studies P.S so perhaps she can do a term paper on the subject...).
This concludes my review. I hope it wasn't too long but I just wanted to give you ideas should you end your hiatus.

I'm really glad you decided to write this fanfic, I like it so far and I'm looking forward to the chapters I haven't read yet. It's also great that you give character descriptions in each chapter. I don't know how far into the story you were when you decided to take a hiatus but I would just love to see the prom chapters after reading that little preview of Chris's death. I understand if you want to move on but I hope you come back to this story and finish it as you've planned.

its been more than a year that you updated. please continue

I know this story hasn't been update in a year or so and I really do think it's a shame. The trolls really had nothing constructive to say, and I really thought this was looking awesome! I was excitedly awaiting the next update which sadly might not be happening soon. But best of luck to you, whatever you're doing these days!