I just found this story and read it in one day. When I read the first chapter I thought, "yay another feelgood fic," but no I got despair.

This was interesting and I liked it but sad nonetheless.
Thx for writing

everytime i find this fic i get depressed, i wish i could unsee this

Jesus fuck, this fanfic made me feel really bad for homura, good job on that.

This is also the most insane madoka that i ever read.

This was alright. Left a bad taste in my mouth, but that's what you wanted so good job. Madoka being incredibly OOC is the biggest problem here. Anyways, thanks for making me cry a bit.

This story should never have existed who ever came up with the idea weather it was the writer or it was suggested should jump into a volcano and save the world from there existence, they should never have born.

The hell was this? This should be labelled as horror story... I'm gonna have nightmares. This is sick.

i felt like killing myself as i read it
Still you did a good job writing it
i am suprised you could actually go throught writing this fic
PS madohomu is the best

I... Really expected Homura to snap and try to 'fix' Madoka herself...
I mean, getting the girl who she loves to turn on her like that would leave her with so much despair, it would break over into corrupted love, and Devil Homura would be born.

It would be epic, and would've made me feel at least slightly better to see this... this... version on Madoka tasting her own poison.

Damn, I love the pairing and I love Madoka, I just can not like 'THIS' Madoka. Does she not realize Homura won't ever be able to live normally again after that? I really wish she could get a visit from the devil. Maybe make an alternate ending? I would like to see that.

In any case, the twist was truly unexpected, never in a million years I would think of Madoka doing that to Homura. The fic overall was well done, although it left a sour taste in my mouth. I won't be favoriting this, I don't want to see this ever again, but I will at least be leaving this review here.

why do you put me in so much despair oh my god this burns my soul

Just ugh

Omg I nearly cried at some of the last chapters, I guess the most heartbreaking was how you described the behaviour of Madoka having that twisted idea of love. Its similar to the way devil Homura defined. But it felt so IC for Madoka to act like that, not overacting or exaggerated. Plus all the atmosphere made me so nervous at times. Awesome work, truly original for a twist of Madoka itself.

Oh wow, that was painful to read. Wonderfully done though. In a depressing sort of way.

What's one thousand minus seven?

While I do like this story for the overall writing style and the portrayal of Homura's emotions throughout, I feel that the actual change and plot was too sudden and wholly implausible. Perhaps Madoka was as deceiving to know about the prior timelines and simply wanted to see Homura break. However, she wouldn't have had that motive from the start as the second and third iterations still had a pretty normal Homura. So what would the point of not telling Homura that she knew about the past iterations? Then she would've saved Homura from changing into the new Homura. Homura wouldn't be alone, which was the cause of her grief and ultimately, her change. Unless I am misunderstanding and you meant that Madoka remembers all the iterations later? Even so, that wouldn't have brought upon such a drastic change in Madoka's character so fast. Otherwise, Madoka would've done something different when she made her wish and understood it all to revert Homura back to who she originally was. Overall good job.

I have just one question to ask:

WHY?!

Really, I think Homura killing herself in the end would have been happier.