Really touching.
Message well delivered...

:_( this story is so sad it made me cry. I hate bullies. You have a really big heart to write this, and you probably saved many lives. I just want to say thank you for trying to help as much as you can. People dint deserve to be bullied.

I am sorry that it took Ally and Trish to die for Austin and Dez to learn what they were doing to others was wrong and to do something about it

Great story very sad.

I cried. This was wonderfully written and it's not random or over the place at all. I enjoyed the emotions. Well done.

sad:'( i like how you did the beginning. It makes me really happy to see so many of these one-shots out there

You just made me cry! This is absolutly touching and shows how words can affect some body so much!

darn you, you made me cry. The reason why you made me cry is because I am bullied a lot. I put my mask and up my walls everyday and pretend those words don't hurt but they do. Everyone sees me as a tough person who always smiles, when on the inside I am fragile I wish I could tell people in person but I can't I am broken.

Oh my goodness, that was traumatizing. But that was meant in the best possible way. It was a scary and sad story, but raises awareness. I liked the format of your writing. The story's supposed to send a message, so don't doubt your writing. That was just...wow. I'm sorry, I have no words. But I was about to cry. Project Beautiful is awesome!