Reviews for What She Wants
Brad Oliver chapter 1 . 5/2/2019
Delia perfers Serena for Ash than Misty
EmaBixx chapter 2 . 3/28/2019
I know you will never do the sequel, but I would have liked to know Brock's reaction, like Jake Peralta (Brooklyn 99), with the phrase "WHATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTHHHHHHHHH?"
aaml lover 25 chapter 1 . 6/27/2018
that was awesome
Quietdrive End chapter 2 . 9/27/2017
This was a really good story!
Guest chapter 2 . 3/15/2017
Please wrote more! Soooo good!
lumigo akvo9504 chapter 2 . 7/22/2016
Please if you can make sequel to this story. It was fun to read and is a great idea you can expand upon. Keep writing and following the ideas you have
Joy-girl chapter 2 . 2/22/2016
Jeezus, you're still around! I know I say this on a fic written 3 years ago, but I was brought here via your latest one after I realized I recognized the author. Sometimes I like to pop into the Pokemon section relive my childhood/teenage years and pretend my age progression is as non-existent as in the show.
Anyway, skimming through and remembering some of your old stories, one of my favorite points is how much you've grown as an author. Just more mature writing with excellent (and amusing) story skills. I like all your stories, but this one stood out and amused me. So thank you for still contributing awesome stories to the fandom!
Mrs. Nose chapter 2 . 12/13/2015
Poor Misty!
She's so believable here. I think that'd be anyone's reaction in her position.
I'm a little upset they never met after the big news, though.
So I'd love a third chapter -winkwink-
Oh, and the message at the end! At some point I thought it were the insults that made him smile at the end of the 1st chapter, but that was much better, obviously XD
All in all, great fanfic. I had a great time reading it.
Mrs. Nose chapter 1 . 12/13/2015
Wow, this is so funny and spot-on!
Ash and his mom's relantionship is so realistic.
I loved this chapter.
midnightscar17 chapter 2 . 1/22/2015
Update
jeannot1978 chapter 1 . 11/4/2014
My laptop jumped the gun on me in chapter 2. Delia Ketchum can help them reconcile their feelings about having the baby. So, now write Delia's Side to finish the story.
jeannot1978 chapter 2 . 11/4/2014
nOW
Guest chapter 2 . 9/13/2014
please write more! this is awesome!
Guest chapter 2 . 7/14/2014
Oh they are just too cute
Guest chapter 1 . 7/14/2014
I was as giddy as Delia through this whole thing
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