Is the whole series complete?

Hadrian’s not half as clever and composed as he pretends to be

‘Waited for a couple of minutes? Does that not strike you as a bit ridiculous? Them ditto there waiting for him to come down for minutes? You sit there now and set a timer for 3 minutes and tell me that isn’t a really long time

Great fanfic, really loved it! Im not a fan of the multiple povs though and they consist of nearly half the fic. Also, i hate how you created Ginny's character, she is too bitchy. Many parts are confusing though.. How was Quirell strong or smart enough to do those weird dark stuff to Destiny? Why did Hadrien not tell about the stone to his father? Why would he need the diary if he could go order the basilisk to kill some students himself? Why Ginny for the diary? Isnt Justin the same year as Hadrien? Isnt Luna/Destiny a year younger than Hadrien and his friends? And where the heck is Tracey Davis? She is a wonderful character you could personalize yet you neglected her! Good fic anyways, i just hope Hadrien turns good in the end and opposes Voldemort or something...

Did I miss something?

What kind of dark lord freaking apologizes for ordering his minions?

love this one too

great start!

literally just cannon with names switched

it was going so well to

I'm... again thrown by the age issue with Harry and his brother. They're 11 now, going to Hogwarts. Dumbledor told Lilly and James that he's known for 8 years that Harry is dead. But Harry was 6 during the adoption...

Then the potions class. I understand for the sake of having your chosen characters in the class at the same time you needed to have Ravenclaw, Gryffindor, and Slytherin all together, but that means one of the houses has potions completely on their own.

Ok, some issues with age in this chapter. Alexander's age is said to be three several times. The first time makes sense; he showed his first signs of magic at age three. However, "it had been a year of training", and then he's still three? On top of the fact a year of training is meant to be around the same time Harry's name changes, and Harry's six. Not to mention their sixth birthday was a couple chapters back.

If you haven't you should watch a movies called: "As Above, So Below"...

Good story, by the way.

its starting to get annoying that its the same as in canon, just tge names swapped

Gotta say, bloody incredible story. Your an amazing writer and I like how despite hermione being a "mudblood" she's still included and has her own dark side. Looking forward to reading year 2 :-) much love!

To be honest I prefer Luna to Destiny. I would’ve liked it if the whole Lovegood family joined the dark lord, except maybe xenophilius. Maybe Luna’s mother would take Luna to him when joining. Or something. Idk, but I do like the lovegoods.