honestly i fell in love with this story faster than thanos could snap his fingers - the way you describe every single little detail, emotion and sight is amazing, it's like watching puzzle pieces fall into place and create a beautiful and absolutely perfect image in my head. not a lot of people have that kind of talent and innate intuition for which words to use to allow the reader to see into the author's mind, to see what they see and what they want their readers to see.
i love how accurately/uniquely you portrayed all of these characters, the obvious and the non-obvious (like kageyama, that was an interesting one, but i especially adore both of erza's, probably because i have a soft spot for erlu-friendship). hope to see a new chapter out soon, but i understand that you're busy so no need to rush :)

It's been close to five years since the last chapter so I don't know if this'll ever get another update (or if you'll even see this review), but I really do love everything that's been written and cherish all the chapters available. I've never seen Outsider POV done quite this interesting!

super interesting addition. Erza cares so much, sees so much, and just wants to protect her friends. She's still trying to figure out where Lucy fits in the scheme. I hope it's her perspective, or Kageyama's, that sees Lucy holding Natsu back from tearing himself apart on the wind barrier.

it’s been a while since I first read this story, but I am so glad that I came back to it. This chapter is absolutely gorgeous the way it is written. It is poetic and flows wonderfully.

Whoa. That last chapter, from Erza's point of view, is breathtaking. I don't know how you came up with all that, but it's like poetry. I'm blown away by the insight all these chapter give in everyone, and they're only getting better. The chapter before this one was also incredible, but I like this one slightly better. I'm just in awe. ALL your chapters are amazing. Thank you for writing this.

Your writing is so unique that I can't get enough of it. I think I'm gonna read all your works because everything is so vague but so damn satisfyingly beautiful that it is impossible not to want to read more. I'll be looking forward to more of your writing!

haha devolution

the descriptions are amazing

Oh Happy! You're so adorable!

Rereading because this story is so amazing

Love this series. Just rediscovered my FanFic account and this story! Please keep it up! :)

I really dolove this story, and cannot wait to see who's point of view you come up with next. I love Happy's ones's...

The Happy chapters are seriously cute! Your writing is very poetic and beautiful and it's very delightful to read. But in some places where you've put long, complicated sentences that makes it harder to understand what I'm reading.

YAYYYYYYYYY! Ahhhh, I honestly needed a break from all the sexy fanfics I've been reading so thank you for writing this... IN ORDER TOO! :DDDDD such a good fanfic. :D I could maybe share it on G when I'm stopping for now. :D

I love this. It's a great break from all the fluff I've been reading. Looking forward to the next chapter. :)