| Reviews for The Spirit of Merry |
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Guest chapter 3 . 6/9/2017 aaaaaaaaaaaaaa omg please update! this story has really great potential! |
Jarjaxle chapter 3 . 5/29/2016 This has potential...but I seriously hope that she become more important to story sooner than later...before Skypiea...or will she start interact with Merry's Klabautertaman first? I say after or during Alabasta Arc...Hope so. So...she kept her Memories even if they were supposed to be erased? Yeye! MERRY IS HERE! |
chibianimefan26 chapter 3 . 12/28/2015 hehh she finally met? talked to Merry~! I wonder what will happen to Zena once Merry dies though o3o Who will she be attached to? oAo Maybe the Sunny hm I think she'll learn to touch hm.. somewhere at Skypiea? xD |
Guest chapter 3 . 3/10/2015 Don't forget chopper is an animal and animals are way more sensitive then humans with spirits |
PhoenixTears21 chapter 3 . 9/13/2014 Review reveiw. I live the idea for this story not enough chapters to have a very good opinion but its very awsome so far |
Wished-On-A-Star chapter 3 . 3/15/2014 YOU! *points dramatically at the author* YOU NEED TO UPDATE! IF YOU DON'T... *brings out a box of cookies* YOU WONT GET ANY COOKIES! |
guest chapter 3 . 2/28/2014 she will lean from merry |
BlushLover930 chapter 3 . 2/23/2014 this is awesome! can't wait for the next chapter! |
Ignis76 chapter 3 . 2/4/2014 Wonderful! XD |
FearaNightmare chapter 2 . 1/26/2014 This is pretty good, I hope you continue it. |
Puppet Dragon chapter 2 . 11/18/2013 Wow I like the direction of this story so far. I think the concept is interesting and I haven't see it before, a sprit thats bonded to the ship, fufufu how fun. You do have a little bit of some grammar issues though. I wonder whats going to happen to her when Merry gets recked to the point of no return and they burn Merry? I can't wait till she is able to touch things, if she can. I liked how you are making her train for a while to be able to do things, like touch, it makes her more realistic than character who gets a ability of a Devil fruit and master it in an instance. Silly girl, Zena, I wonder how she thinks she'll be able to save Ace when she can't even leave the ship? What does she think she'll do, drop the floor boards beneath his feet and have him fall into the depths of the ship and not allow him to leave to 'save him' lol? Since she is bonded to the ship as of sorts will she be able to control the ship at all, or is that solely Merry's klabautermann's ability? Maybe I'm just over thinking it. I like the angel Josephine, she's so mean and rough and seems non-angel like its funny. I can't wait for your next update! :) This story shows promise, I hope you stick with this story to the end. |
Mugiwara Otome chapter 2 . 11/17/2013 Here's a cookie. Awaiting updates. |