| Reviews for Royal Arrival |
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   MariaPau25 chapter 19 . 7/31 Por favor, por favor otroooo te lo suplico. Es una gran historia y quiero seguir leyendoooo |
| BorderLand chapter 2 . 11/21/2019 Oh, she is Vegeta sister and Gohan will marry the girl for sure...the comedic value of this piece of infromation makes me invardly Kaught like a madman. |
| Guest chapter 19 . 6/2/2019 UPDATE! |
| Guest chapter 19 . 8/11/2017 I have no idea of your still on but this is one of the best Fanfiction I've read in a long time. The relationships and character developments area amazing as well as the detail you go into. Please take the time to finish this one and give me and other readers some closure. |
| Dragconic Slayer chapter 19 . 2/12/2017 Where is the next chapeter?! I NEED MORE |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/31/2017 you should write goku x saiyan female romance fic. it would be more interesting |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/26/2016 I have a request. Can you write a fanfic on goku and female saiyan. perhaps vegetas sister. let it be romance and make it realistic. pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease. |
| DarksGamer98 chapter 19 . 12/13/2016 Update it please dont leave it on hiato |
| Super Vegeta chapter 19 . 4/7/2016 Some chapter's have team four star refrences |
| Ninamory chapter 19 . 12/1/2015 I am enjoying this story so far. Hope there is more soon. |
| Regin chapter 19 . 9/30/2015 I Like, I Lust,I Love!Please Update Soon! |
| The Hammer of Justice chapter 19 . 9/5/2015 Great chapter, I thought the concept of Super Android 18 was brilliant! Took me a couple of minutes of searching, and I found a nice enough concept image of Super 16,17 and 18 (in which she looks hot too)! Regarding the details of the two pairings, I say write both in equal detail because, the more the merrier, right? :D You've done a fine job with Present Gohan and Celeria's relationship, and I'm sure you'll do just as well with Mirai Gohan and Lazuli as well. The only thing I have to say about your fic as a negative would be that you've made Celeria too human-like. If I remember correctly, Bardock was a Saiyan through and through, even after he was blasted into the past; I can't really imagine a Celeria that was trained by Bardock to be human like in behavior — I feel that it does the Saiyans themselves a disservice. Also, you've sort of made Vegeta a joke, which isn't something I'm too fond of. But hey, it's your story so.. Good job, and keep it up! |
| dbzfan the first chapter 19 . 8/25/2015 alright good chap keep going |
| E-kingmoney18 chapter 19 . 8/24/2015 Focus more on gohan and celaria but it's your story so u do u |
| E-kingmoney18 chapter 16 . 8/24/2015 Yo bro amazing story u have and yea lapis and gohan personality clash great together |
