Mrs. Bloom... something I need to know about? btw I love this story!

She found out about dark bloom too early. it needs to go on slowly building it all up and then releasing it all at once.

Lov the chapter.

so cn you the topic like evil flor

This is a cool story. You might wanto to stretch the end our though. Maybe make how they defeated Dakar with Baltor/Valtor's help? I ship Bloom and him. Lol really.

Kawaii, that stoeywas kool

Great Story that ending was great!

Nice Story, I look forward to more of your works so keep updating!

That was a great story I couldn't stop reading the cliffhanger at the end left me in suspense.

its good how your doing the story so far but maybe that whole seeing her cat eyes in the mirror was too early instead I think u should have gone with dark thoughts of u know wondering about the darkness then in chtr 2 u show that in chptr 3 u should have her go on an adventure and faint thus waking up turning into dark bloom but it lasts for a few min she's still freaked out n chptr 4 have darker or baltor visit her and in chptr 5 u should have her finally convince herself tht shes in love with the darkness then in chptr 6 she leaves alfea in chtr 7 her friends visit her at her house and he attacks them and transforms into dark bloom in chptr 8 she formulats a plan to get the ultimate power in cptr 9 she and baltor or darker carry out the plan and they cant stop them in chptr 10 do a diary of drk bloom of how it feels to be in control then u can do a sequel

YAYYYYYYYYYYY !

Yeah ! Awesome ! I love how you write and unlike some writers, YOU ACTUALLY PUT QUOTATAION MARKS AROUND YOUR WORD WHEN THEY'RE NEEDED !

i have read all of the chapters they are amazing no lie 3

Loved it please continue

Omigod! you torture me! I want to read more! Write it soon! Please! I need to know what happened!