I'm re reading it and I'm getting overly excited again xD

How much longer .. if ever .. is the next update going to be uploaded?!

I'm simply tired of waiting and my enthusiasm is much too deflated to continue reading abandoned fictions .. even though your writing style is one of the most enthralling I've ever come across!

Which is why I can't help but be gravely disappointed ..

It's sad this will never be finished...

please finish it it's very good i am at the edge of my seat completly hooked. please compleat it soon

This story is looking very nice in both shape and plot depth!

I particularly liked the way you portrayed Kaiba's and Mokuba's meeting with their older/younger selves, and how they deal with it in what I saw as some sort of morbid curiosity, the younger Kaiba perhaps unconsciously wanting to discover what made his older self become as he is.

It's a shame that you decided to stop writing this fiction (or so it seems after 7 years of being put on hold), as it most certainly has a great potential, should it be continued.

As such, if you don't mind, I'd like to make a request that may or may not be done with presumption on my part: With your permission, I'd like to attempt making a story of my own, using your first (and perhaps second) chapter(s) as a base/foundation to the plot. I find the idea of having Kaiba and Mokuba meet their past selves highly interesting, and I'd like to go through with my idea, once again with your permission.

I thank you in advance to any reply that you may offer me.

Can you please update? Four years is long enough for a wait!

No, wait, 4 years and 3 months! UPDATE, please!

the lady of light sounds cool . anyway please post more and keep up the good work .

please update soon! Your stort is awsome! YOU RULE!

The only thing I'd like to say is: such evil evil cliffhangers, Takaishi-kun. Please restart your fic sometime soon? I, as well as many of your fans, are looking forward to your next installment. I can only hope it's soon.

oh please update soon, its been over two years since you last updated!

Cool, keep it up! Sessha hopes you update soon

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Erp...please update! Ack! You haven't updated in 2 years, about! T_T

please update soon! evil cliffhanger, evil

please update soon! you cant just leave people in suspense like that! i want to see the outcome of the duel, and what happened to kaiba?

I read this fic a LONG time ago but that was back when I wasn't a member, therefore I didn't know I could still review. Good work! Overall, very interesting and an update would be nice.