This is really good! Plz make moar!

Oh gosh, more. More now! Please?

MOAR

Yea! New chapter. Cant wait for the next!

(This is late cause my last reveiw didnt post... lol)

I need the next chapter! I hate unfinished things :( *folds arms grumpily*

FINALLY!
Took you long enough to just be direct, Lalna.
I love how Rythian's just like "You screwed up, I'm not your mom, go clean it up yourself!"
Looking forward to the next chapter as always!
P.S. Have you seen BepBopVox's new
Minecraft parody? I can't get it out of my head lol
-Spirit

dun dun dun m ore pleasse!

can you please finish your stories? it makes me mad cause i love the story then you just stop it somewhere random! RARG i just wanna c da end of ALL your stories! (ps plz check you finish words and have made sentances that make sense plz [...feel fe...] doesnt make sense sorry {btw ... means there some words before/after}

another great chapter, really liking the story! :)

great chapter, love the end. :) Can't wait to find out what happens!

Can't wait to find out what happens! Please write more.

Rythian! :D

Whoa! Holy shit! Was NOT expecting that! Can I guess who can see him (Even though I'm probably wrong)?

MindBlown

This was a incredable story bro! You should continue writing it, so we can keep on reading it! I love the emotion and significance you make it have. I love your knowledge of the Yogscast family. And sir/ma'am (IDK which you are), keep up the good work!