| Reviews for When the World Falls Down |
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   Bard of Innail chapter 20 . 6/30 I understand why you brought Sarah back but it does feel like a cop-out. If you have the balls to kill off a character, especially a main character, you should have the balls to let them stay dead. I was literally in tears and I loved every minute of it before that happened, but bringing her back makes what could have been a powerful ending feel lackluster and anticlimactic. |
| CharlieBoneFan chapter 20 . 11/10/2018 Great! It was beautiful! |
| breejah092381 chapter 20 . 12/30/2017 This story moved me so much! The ending had me in tears! I haven’t cried that hard in a long time (in a good way). I loved the follow up happy ending even though this one had a great lesson buried in it. Bravo! |
| Dancing-Ink-Demon chapter 20 . 3/28/2017 This was a beautiful story! |
| Dancing-Ink-Demon chapter 7 . 3/28/2017 Very nice! |
| Dancing-Ink-Demon chapter 6 . 3/28/2017 Oh wow! |
| Dancing-Ink-Demon chapter 5 . 3/28/2017 I absolutely loved this! |
| Dancing-Ink-Demon chapter 4 . 3/28/2017 Another really good chapter! |
| Dancing-Ink-Demon chapter 3 . 3/28/2017 I loved it! |
| Dancing-Ink-Demon chapter 2 . 3/28/2017 Loved this chapter! |
| Dancing-Ink-Demon chapter 1 . 3/28/2017 Beautiful! |
| Sazzle76 chapter 20 . 12/20/2016 Very late to the party I know but just wanted to let you know that I loved it, great job well done : ) |
| devilmaycryforever chapter 20 . 10/30/2016 it is interesting and different, i like it! |
| Enchanted Peach Dreams chapter 20 . 7/13/2016 So glad for the happy ending. I was crying, but now I am rejoicing! Thank you! |
| Enchanted Peach Dreams chapter 12 . 7/12/2016 Okay, I seriously need an icy cold shower! ️ |
