| Reviews for A Beautiful Lie |
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Lady Pinkroses chapter 5 . 4/6/2019 This is so funny (and kind of sad at times) and the only thing I regret about it is that I read while my roommate is sleeping and I can't actually laugh out loud and have to be quiet about it. There are some things I love about it: The misunderstandings with the Red Tails. It doesn't matter if Furuichi is a guy or a girl, they always think the worse of her/him. The beatings in thr bathroom. Can you imagine being known as the guy who beats everybody everytime you go to the bathroom. Or, if it's known that it's Furuichi the one that needs to go, being known as the one who makes another guy beat everyone before you pee? I imagine people whispering: Oh no! Everytime Furuichi makes a comment about bathrooms. This ia so hilarious for me. Toujou being like: do not insult girls like that while he was being told the truth. You have the best intentions, but boy, you dumb. Furuichi wanting to show off her body and Oga being like "nop" everytime. |
zeyreele chapter 5 . 2/6/2018 it's been like 4 years now and even though i know it's probably not going to happen, im still waiting for a continuation! please please please pleeaaasssseee (also, oga x furuichi is life, just sayin.) |
the everchanging chapter 5 . 12/26/2017 This is so funny! |
SnowShiro-Kitsune14 chapter 5 . 5/27/2017 I missed this fic~ This fic was one of my favorites and I'm sad that it looks like it's never getting updated again...I reread this again because it'sjust that good and I'm hoping against hope that one day either this will be updated again or at the very least I may be able to find a similar fic to this...This fic is unique that's why it's much harder to let go...I really hope I'd see more fics like this |
OIP chapter 5 . 7/18/2016 I really like the interaction between Oga and fem!Furuichi. I like that you still maintained the beatings that Furu would get from Oga. It's not that I condone to physical abuse but that's how Oga treats Male!Furuichi and I feel that him being a girl shouldn't make that huge of an impact on how he's (or she) is being treated, though Oga might be a bit softer on fem!Furu. Plus they've been friends a long time so the physical contact would kinda become natural thing and that's what I like about this. I like Oga treating Furu like a iperson/i and not just a girl. Granted that he does get somewhat overprotective of Fem!Furu but considering what almost happened in middle school with that A-hole senior, I would be surprised. |
shikyoDEATH chapter 5 . 4/13/2016 This so awesome! I love that Furuihi is still perverted. The friendship between her and Oga is very cool and relaxed. I think Toujo would probably have a big reaction. Poor Jinno, ha ha. This story super cool. Have a great day! :) |
Devlin Dracul chapter 5 . 12/11/2015 18 months later, and this story is still a great read. I really hope it gets an update. The reveal I want to see the most is Hilda. She's been around Furuichi for quite a bit of time. How the hell hasn't she noticed? I never did respect her, but she must be a major idiot to not have noticed this late in the game. Also, I really want to see her reaction when finds out that Creepichi was actually Femichi the entire time. She might even become insecure. Furuichi spends the most time with Oga, which subsequently means she spends the most time with Baby Beel. She might feel that her role as the mother might be threatened. The Tissue Arc is also something to look forward to. Being possessed by Hecadoth (and maybe Jabberwock) might be a dream come true for her. I'd also like to know how you'd right her epic speech. The original had to wear a mask of happiness while being insulted everyday. Yours was FORCED to wear a mask of masculinity and was continually insulted by the Red Tails. Her speech might be especially painful. I'm also curious about Kunieda discovering the secret. She'd probably think of a plethora of different misunderstandings about the two friends (some may even fall into the more M-rated category). I truly hope you find the time to update the story. If you can't do that, then at least tell us if you've discontinued the story. It may be a beautiful lie, but this is a spectacular story. |
GreenCAT the second chapter 5 . 7/26/2015 tragic |
Anonymous Miki chapter 5 . 6/4/2015 Sabotage. That last scene stinks of Oga Tatsumi Brand Sabotage! This is brilliant. Please update again as soon as you can! |
Marie chapter 5 . 5/27/2015 This story is stupidly hilarious. Nice! |
yoink chapter 5 . 5/19/2015 i can't wait for a new chapter! gaaaahhh seriously this fic is gold bless you xD |
ArizunoShojo chapter 1 . 5/15/2015 Dear Thecurtaincall I must say that I really like your stories, I find this one especially cute. I am just wondering if this project has been abandoned or if you are planning on coming back to it again. I find the interactions between Oga and Furu-chan (girl Furuichi) hilarious. Even if Furu-chan isn't as strong as Oga she is not exactly delicate. I also like the fact that you kept Furuichi's perverted nature, sneaky remarks and smarts. Also on Furu-chan's part it is quite obvious that her feelings for Oga is that of a friend. On Oga's part it can be two things he is either protective of her because she is his dear friend or he might be doing things like keeping her gender a secret in order to keep romantic competitors away. Also how did Furu-chan's family take it when Alaindelon moved in with them as her "boyfriend"? Poor girl must have wanted to hide under a rock or bash in the old mans head. Also how "girly" is Furu-chan at a scale from 1 to 10. 1 being "tomboy" and 10 being "girly girl". Abe probably has a small crush on her after seeing her in that pink maid outfit (episode 6) |
Nanashi chapter 1 . 2/28/2015 Like the plot, nice details you put in the characters and overall cool story hope you update soon |
Guest chapter 5 . 12/2/2014 I wonder when we'll get to read the Hilda and Kunieda reveal chapters. 2014 is coming to an end. It'd be nice if these two chapters came before then. |
furu chapter 1 . 11/16/2014 i dont know why but this is the only pair in yaoi -for me- that i do not mind in reading friendship. Theyre just awesome like that. |