Is the author dead or something if so R.I.P.

and someone please adopt this story it has great freaking Potential.

Sounds like a nerd was in charge of naming the underwater cities aka rapture

Come on man I've been waiting for you to update for years this has great potential

Please continue this is so good.

I love this. You need to continue this. the plot is just so amazing

Epic story concept so far, looking forward to more chapters in future, now if you'll excuse me i'm off to read your other AH stories :)

Great story would love to see more

oh come on can you write more then one bloody chapter before giving up (you got some good starts just write more)

Really cool idea

This seems like an interesting premise. I'm guessing T-eng is basically the new photosynthesis given that the sun is gone. Give it a natural quasi-magnetic attraction and you have a perpetual motion machine. This seems like it could go a lot for different directions, and I'm really looking forward to seeing where you go. A few plot holes I noticed (and possible solutions): Since the Akrid have nothing to hunting on earth (not to mention no need to given T-eng) the only reason they'd evolve things such as scales or even limbs is to ward off predators. An easy way to smooth this over would be to include an ecosystem based around Akrid as producers, much like plants. Just throw in a basic worm-like creature that crushes them and eats them. This makes the most sense, given that worms are very basic life forms and tube worms that use chemical reactions to sustain themselves exist on the ocean floor near heat vents. With human activity underground and near hotbeds cutting off many life-giving chemicals larger, more omnivorously inclined worms would have had a better chance of survival. Also, ones the moved to higher areas would have been less affected by human deep-sea activity. Over time this leads to them reaching the surface, becoming able to crawl on land for short periods to eat the predecessors of the acrid, which up till now had been basically just blobs that reproduced, and thus survival of the fitesst could take place. You could get away with not mentioning them in the first chapter given that they would mainly focus on filtering human runoff using old dormant chemical synthesis, and thus not bother with the now human-guarded docile Akrid, opting to hunt the feral Akrid.

Plot hole nr.2: I get the appeal of a multi-racial task force, but there is no existing citadel official who would hire krogan and a quarian for a classified mission as opposed to operatives they knew and had control over. Think back to how the council operates. All police action is taken by the Primacy (Turian government) with a few local exceptions, and the Primacy only employs Turians. Solution: Come up with an OC Victus-like Turian who was chosen the mission for his expirience in dealing with "primitive races" after he managed to defuse what almost became a yahg civil war (he abducts the yahg version of Helen of Troy, for extra fun have her as part of his crew, for ALL the fun have him be in a relationship to her, but write her really masculine (it's an overdone gimmick, but I swear it will not let you down)). He recruits his own men, thus creating a situation for a Primacy-sponsored multi-racial task force. This even sets up a nice opportunity for personalized crew, and a really intimate first contact, with characters we grow to know and love (plus ones we already love, as I'm pretty sure that quarian is either Tali or her mother. Honestly, I hope it's her mother. Rael's wife always gets described second-rate, but seeing her on her pilgrimage while she was still young could be really fun. Hell, you could make her have a fling with someone for added drama) meeting each other, and us seeing them through each other's eyes.

Anyways, those are the only two that I noticed without splitting hairs. Hope you like my ideas. Please update soon :).

nice

Dude I have been waiting for years for you to update hurry up man

I love this story. It's just awesome.

I love the idea and the start of this story, hope you continue it someday.

No está mal. / Not bad.