This story has been written since 4 years ago and how is it I only found this treasure now? This is incredible. The way they acted and talked, the way their relationship progressed, the way their problems arose and solved, everything is simply achingly beautiful. This is amazing. You are very talented! Thank you for writing and sharing this diamond with us.

I love this mai, not whiny and imature like in other fanfics..

I wonder why I never came across this one! Love it!
By far one of the best one-shots I've ever read!

*sobbing and internal fanism
oh my gosh, cheesy at its finest, i loved it, yes!
XDD i had fun while reading this :3 it was very enjoyable!
Thank you for writing!

THis was SO CUTE. OMG the living in a deaf world thing was just... You have a magical way with words. Thank you!

aww that was so cute. part 2?

Aww that was really cute! That's one of the best one-shots I've ever read and it's hard to find newer GH one-shots! Great job : )

lol this made me cry abit...good job and this souned alot like naru and mai

Great story. I really enjoyed it.

That was so cheesy went beautiful at the same time

This is so precious! I love the NaruXMai fluffiness!

this is sooo wonderful!

Good one! Actually I was quite happy when he explained himself to Mai and Mai's character was done quite well, good job!

Aaawwww! I love it. I like how Naru used her words to confess to her. So clever! The small fluff is such a delight! I also love Mai's character here, more mature and decisive. The first part the limelight goes to Mai then a bit of the end focused on Naru and her. I just love it! Hope you make more one-shots like this.

More of this!