Reviews for Heat of the Smiling Sun
2012 chapter 8 . 8/14
Oh I've just been thinking about this just recently! I was too scared to check if this was still around, but I'm glad to know it's still available.

When was the last time I've saved this? O-Oh... 2017... time sure does fly!

I'm happy to know you're still kicking though, hope you continue to stay safe in this crazy world. xT
mirrorkinomoto chapter 2 . 1/18/2018
I was about to say , " i don't think maka'd ever do that ..." but then it was a dream and it's okay because dreams are weird .
mirrorkinomoto chapter 1 . 1/18/2018
so crona is in love with maka...interesting ** cant wait to read the next to see how will this developp :D
TrigunInferno chapter 7 . 11/20/2017
Nice chapter
2011 chapter 7 . 11/19/2017
Ahh, I was so happy to see this in my inbox~ And... somewhat sad...

Mostly cause there's older stories I've liked before and most of them have been abandoned or worse... deleted.

Anyways, I'm happy that you're still continuing this, most have moved on with their lives, which is understandable, I don't blame them for making that decision. But you... uhh... thank you... I gotta go now, nostalgia is making me too emotional, and... I'm sorry, I wish you well in life.
Guest chapter 6 . 6/13/2017
Update! Please!
anon chapter 6 . 5/24/2017
this is good! i cant wait for the next chapter. i hope youll publish it soon! :'D
DARKNESS4311 chapter 6 . 1/21/2017
Great story I all was loved seeing these two togther in a story and as a couple, and I have say good job I can't wait till the next chapter. I hope in the next chapter they can be closer together as a couple and try a bit more like having that talk about wiching each other like that was a good one.
anon chapter 6 . 1/13/2017
next chapter pleaaaaase TTTT
That idiot from 2011 chapter 6 . 12/29/2016
It's been three years and I'm surprised I still haven't "reviewed" yet. But I guess that's a good thing since I've said a lot of stupid crap in the beginning...

Anyways, yes, I've really enjoyed it. I don't see these two as often anymore, but I'm glad and grateful to see this continued again. Thank you, I'm really looking forward to seeing the "fun" to finally begin in the next chapter~
bigbook29 chapter 6 . 7/10/2016
It's alright man, take your time.
bigbook29 chapter 5 . 6/12/2016
Well I hope that we can get a chapter soon. I like this story and love to see Crona get with his 'bookeorm'.
Ynot7 chapter 5 . 6/11/2016
It's cool, life happens.

Anyways, I really liked the chapter. Very sweet and erotic. I do hope, however that it won't take too long getting to the good stuff.

I also noticed a small mistake. Near the bottom, Crona says he hates how people see him as a "benevolent" bloodthirsty creature. I think you mean "malevolent".

Still, it's a small mistake. Overall, I really enjoyed this chapter, especially all those descriptions of Maka's body, heh-heh.

Curious, have you thought about having some bits where Maka's lusting after Crona, while he's taking a bath or something? I'd really enjoy that.

Anyways, props on a great chapter, and I'm looking forward to more.
Emarin chapter 4 . 4/23/2016
This fan fiction, even though I haven't read many, is at the top of my list.
My only "complain" is that I have to wait for more!
Please continue to keep up the good work and keep those creative juices flowing.
Writing is an form of art that people are growing to lazy to appreciate. Having that said, I commend what you are doing and I'm excited to see where this story goes and encourage you to write more stories. You are an inspiration to not only me, but all writers.

Emarin Hueco Cero
PyroNyzen chapter 4 . 4/29/2015
awesome and adorably cute story.
Please write more.
28 | Page 1 2 Next »