Correct portrayal of Lily Potter. She would never have abandoned one of her sons for any reason. And James Potter loved his wife too much to contradict her. And I still did not like your Dumbledore. Dumbledore was still Macchiavellian - only thinking of people as pawns in his chess board.

I love it!

THAT's what should have happened, not the usual 'Love WBWL, Hate Harry' stories, turning Potters into magical version of Dursleys.

This is a simple story and one that is vere sweet !

The Crimson Mage.

I like this. I wish there was more.

THIS is what I know that would happen in this circumstance. Congrat's!