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BTW, I was just thinking: Don't take brotherly lessons from Tatsuya. The only thing you will learn is how to be a servant and serve your "master's" every whim and desire. There is only one positive thing: You will learn some awesome kick-ass moves!

May I request this be tagged as a tragedy instead?
It's good btw.
Very.
That's why now I'm a bit depressed, because your work was able to work its magic on me.
Thanks for the read.

Nice one, sensei. Keep your work going

I would have preferred it to be maiyumi or erica or shizuku with tatsuya . But this is a nice change from your usual miyuki x tatsuya fic which I personally dislike the pairing so I give this 4/5 (there always room for improvement).so keep up the good work and please try to write a maiyumi x tatsuya pairing fic its my favorite . Thanks

After reading this, I really hate Miyuki even more than before and i though that was impossible. Really, Miyuki is way too selfish, she could have any other man she wanted at yet she chooses Tatsuya, her older BROTHER by blood. Your story is really good, can you make another one like this? But based on the nut-job's view? (The nut job is Miyuki BTW)

nice choice of pairing. i never like miyuki anyway.

Thank you, my friend, for writing such a delicate masterpiece
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By the way, can you give my pray, a ordinary Vietnamese, for all Haiyan's victims in your country?
" Chúng ta có thể không là anh em, thậm chí không là người cùng một nước. Nhưng chúng ta vẫn là anh em
bởi tình yêu và lòng nhân hậu đã gắn kết trái tim chúng ta lại".
Thank you again.

Heart breaker! Tatsuya the heart breaker!

I never liked miyuki anyways

Not bad...Could be better

This story is so sad! T_T