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I have too much to say for this one review, but, the end verdict is
THIS WAS SO WORTH READING!
This is by far one of the best Henry fics I have ever read

THIS WAS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!

I love Henry! And I love how you portray their relationship in this story! :) It is wonderful to have the avatar's backstory in here and I like how you included that she is royalty! :) Thank you for making such a great story as there is not much HenryxMU in here :)

Without a doubt on of the best fire emblem stories I've read in a while. I hope you make another one with Henry.

So I know this was posted like a year ago and by the looks of your history you don't really pass by the FE areas anymore (it is a pretty slow place) but I just want to say that, for someone that just got into Awakening, this is one of my favorite stories. Henry became one of my favorite characters in the game and I really like what you did with him here and his relationship with the Avatar. Cheers.

One of my favorite Henry fics! It's a bit more serious than the other ones with him cracking puns all the time, but I like it that way. I love how you portrayed Robin with two personalities with the Grimleal and with the Shepards, it seems very fitting. Also, did you base this on English Henry or Japanese Henry? It feels like you slant more towards Jap Henry cause he doesn't joke as much.

Reading your fanfic, I'm disappointed there's not a lot of Henry fics too!

Also, I know it goes with your story, but I'm not a huge fan of names that deviate from the original (Robin), though I can stand it if the story is good (which yours is).

To say that this is beautiful is an understatement. I really like Henry even though he's very queer to most people and it may be hard to write him but you portrayed him nicely. The whole thing just seems right (well, in my opinion) and the flow of the whole story is just excellent. You do have some typos here and there but it's not something too complicated. So thank you for this wonderful story.

The silly thing is, I tend to pair up Morgan with Lucina because they're just too adorable. And Morgan and Henry do look an awful lot like each other, don't they? Especially when they're both smiling or sad. I think it's a shame that there aren't many fics out there that pair up the Avatar and Henry, so this is actually quite refreshing. And man, I friggin' love Henry. He's my favorite in the Fire Emblem series. He's such an adorable little psycho sometimes, but that's what makes him so great.

Nice job with this fic, by the way. I caught a few typos here and there, but it didn't interfere with the overall pacing and story at all. Loved your portrayal of Henry and kudos for writing in a little bit of his backstory. This sort of makes me want to write a story of my own, but it would probably pale in comparison to this.

Thanks for sharing this with us!

Hehe, this was nice, especially the ending. :)

Haha sorry I faved this earlier planning to review later but I didn't get around to it till this morning. :/ yeahhh I'm a bit scatterbrained.

Anyways, awesome one shot you have here. Keeping Henry in character ( an almost impossible task if you ask me), the non-rushyness (yes I invented a new word) in their relationship and dat reunion... *sniff* those feels.

I couldnt find any glaring mistakes, it all flowed pretty nicely, but then again im not a beta and my own grammar is horrible lol.

But to me this was an all in all a great one shot, a pleasant read, a nice length, and an overall epic in score XD.

I hope to see more Fire Emblem from you in te future!

-OSM

Oh. My. God.

I'm absolutely in love with your story! Avatar/henry is like my otp and its so frustrating because there are hardly any fics or fan images of them :( but this was like finding the holy grail of avatar/henry, it was just perfect!

I liked the idea that henry and the avatar met and worked together in the plegian army before reuniting in the ylissian army, very cute, and then they got married and morgan came and henry was worried about being a good father but then she sacrificed herself and it was all a bit angsty it was just ajdhdjebe#& ... perfect there are literally no words for how much I adored this.

Also want to write a quick note about how you kept Henry in character, in my opinion I think henry can be one of the hardest to keep incharacter especially when you delve into deeper meanings and feelings with him, so I think you did a fantasic job with that :)

P.S. Apologies if this review reads funny, I dont really review often and I had heaps I wanted to say but didnt know how to word it so I just kinda chucked all these words at you :S