Wow! This was so raw!

Oh my god i love it

And now Killian’s perspective! Magnificent! Truly! Well done! This is definitely a favorite! Thank you so much for writing it!

Oh. My. Goodness... this is INCREDIBLE! Wow! Beautiful imagery, even with all the pain contained therein! And Killian coming in and giving her the strength to fight back! Absolutely beautiful! And I know you didn’t say, but I was seeing this in Neverland since Neal was there.

Oh, I don't know if seeing this from Killian's view is any better! And when he comes into contact with Emma, he sees his own moments of pain. Gosh, this was wonderfully written, I love how David knows that Killian should go to Emma, but still heart-wrenching. You weren't kidding with angst, huh? Thanks for this!

Oh, my god! That hurt so much. Emma forced to relive all those painful moments and everyone just forced to watch. I love how Killian is there for her and helps her fight back and supporting her. And David punching Neal! Wow, just wow.

I saw a request for this fic on Tumblr. This is soooo good! So much pain and emotion. I love that Killian touched her skin to take some of it from her.

And Neal totally deserved that punch to the face!

So I just begged tumblr for this fic and refound it. It's brilliant. Harrowing, but brilliant.

Sad but beautifully done.

good, good chapter

nice touch in this last paragraph... Neal definitely deserved

Love this! I would also love to hear more about Charming beating the heck out of Neal.

Very creative and wonderful idea, although a little (well, a lot) sad. Definitely a good story.

Hey !

Thought it was one of the best CS fanfictions I read so far !
Yes, there's no context, but it feels more like we're getting into the story. I'm the kind of writer who loves writting details, context, atmosphere but when I read your fanfic, I was a little jealous of your talent to put us into the story right away with few words !

Great, great talent that you have, dearie ! :)

I'll go read all of your others stories ! It goes in my fav and you're definitely in my fav authors list!

See you around ! ;)
~ Nyxia

** Sorry if I let slipped some mistakes... I'm a French Canadian, so this explains that ! ;)

I feel like this might have been better with a little bit of context, but then again a lot of these stories provide a meager explanation as an excuse to just get to the juicy part anyway, so I guess that's fine. :P

But still, this was rather gorgeous. And I loved the little add-on to the first chapter of Charming punching Neal. That was rather great.