Reviews for Self Control
Eliasfw chapter 1 . 12/21/2019
I really like this story, Ruby and Weiss are so cute. I do have two things that bothered me
1: You refereed to Ruby, a redhead, as "the brunette". What?
2: Why couldn't Ruby just tell Weiss about the bet with Yang, just tell her whats going on?

Other than that, I think it's a really sweet story, and Id like to se more of this
Sophisticated Sage chapter 1 . 10/5/2019
White Rose is like my comfort food for fanfiction :P
Freedomewriter chapter 1 . 1/21/2019
This is So freaking adorable! I love it! It's just the perfect blond of cuteness, embarrassment, drama, and romance!
10 outta freaking 10
Rwby Arc chapter 1 . 10/24/2017
So cute!
AllTheCliches chapter 1 . 9/14/2017
I am slowly making my dent in the rwby masterpost... particularly scrolling through the white rose ones first and I had to stop cause this one had me grinning like an idiot. Christ this was cute.
PastellRain chapter 1 . 6/23/2016
I couldn't help but think Yang was a little mean in this fic! Snickering at Ruby behind her back and taking away Weiss embrace that meant so much to her! Couldn't Yang see all the pain she was causing? And after that she still had it so Ruby couldn't eat sweets!

Or, it could have been just me who thought Yang was mean. If I were Ruby I would've been cross with her.

I really liked this one! It was fun, sweet, a little bit of drama all in one. I liked how it slipped into a small misunderstanding, but it cleared up quickly and had a sweet ending. It really showed Weiss' character, how much she cared for Ruby, how broken-hearted she must have felt the second Ruby backed away from the kiss. .

At least Ruby has something sweeter than sweets. (Weiss) :3
czfjopa chapter 1 . 4/30/2015
Correct me if I'm wrong, but I did not see anything stating Ruby couldn't tell Weiss why she couldn't kiss her. If Ruby had told Weiss, then everything would've gone smoothly and Ruby would've won the bet. Don't get me wrong, I loved the fanfic. I just noticed that little thing.
Gathering the Roses chapter 1 . 2/6/2015
this needs more reviews. fun read!
AmphrosDragon chapter 1 . 12/19/2014
so cute. weiss and ruby are both such dorks.
Grace chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
Great, after writing that review, now I want to read a fic in which Weiss has a nightmare that her treatment of Ruby leads the latter to distance herself from Weiss...Maybe think about it? Please?
Grace chapter 1 . 10/5/2014
You know, you'd figure that if Weiss truly loved Ruby that much and was so worried about her, she could be a little bit nicer toward her... Don't get me wrong, she's probably my favorite character in the series, and I love White Rose, but I think my favorite stories are the ones set in Kei and Ami's Future AU, since Weiss isn't always scolding Ruby and calling her dunce - she still does it, but much, much less. I suppose it's an effect of growing up, though.

Love the story!
mikotyzini chapter 1 . 4/16/2014
Ah poor Weiss! I was feeling so very very sad for her while also angry at Ruby for following through with it for so long. I mean, who could say no to a whimpering Weiss? Great story!
Weiss Schneezed chapter 1 . 4/2/2014
That was cute
Vanquish123 chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
That's way too damn cute! I'm practically dying with how much fluff I just ingested. XD

Your fluff stories never disappoint, and always manage to leave a smile on my face. I loved the scenario, this type of bet is exactly something I could picture Ruby attempting. However, I can't exactly picture Weiss allowing Ruby to be so affectionate in public (not that it would stop her, mind you). Although, Weiss WOULD feel somewhat suspicious and hurt that Ruby wasn't acting like her usual dorky and affectionate self with her. I feel as if the resolution was perfect, although, part of me would have liked Yang to get her comeuppance in some way. XD

I'm looking forward to reading your next story.
Fremde Is Not Taken okay chapter 1 . 2/6/2014
I so wanna see how Yang will handle this better ( if she can that is )
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