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Beautiful! I've never wanted to be Gabe - or Sam - so much!

I loved it. Its amazing.

*goes over to you're corner* you can come out whenever you feel up to it :p honestly? well done! Was this your first time really writing a one shot? It's a good attempt for you're first try if that's the case! I have to say, because I'm a big fan of people writing this idea, that I love the little splash of Wing!kink you added in there. I don't see enough of it that's probably why I incorporate it into my stories whenever I can. XD and for less than four thousand words you were able to rap it up nicely. I've read quite a few stories about Gabe and his sweets, but this one sticks out to me :) by all means keep writing and challenging yourself and make something else just as sweet! ;)

Seriously am I the only one who has reviewed this? SERIOUSLY sheesh guys X) well I can be the first! I can be such a kid, yes I know lol

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