Ah this so bad to see you go, I hope and pray it gets better soon.
Be Strong. In life we get mountains in our ways and sometimes it seems impossible to move them but someway there's always away. I keep on listening to Miley Cyrus song THE CLIMB it keeps me going in these times.
Good luck

An interesting read so far! It's good to see the story from different perspectives! Keep it up! :)

Hey another good chapter, the vendor was a good addition to this chapter, and I was quite surprised when Kurtis found out he was actually Karel, that was a good disguise from him. We also see William's point of view when he arrives in Cappadocia here, I wonder how he will be able to find the last Nephilim sleeper. Great effort, looking forward to the next chapter :D

очень интересно что будет дальше,жду продолжения)))

Nice chapter, you've written this part of AOD in the Parisian Ghetto very good, and it's great knowing what Lara and Kurtis points of view were as the chapter progressed. Looking forward to the next chapter, keep up the great work! :D

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Good continuation, it's great seeing parts of the story of AOD from Lara's and Kurtis's point of view :) In this chapter we see William heading to Turkey while Kurtis stays to help Lara. Lara's dream was interesting, I wonder how she will use the amulet to help in her journey. Keep up the great work! :D

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Another good chapter, you've shown the first scene in AOD from two different points of view here very good :) I wonder what will happen next now Lara is on the run, keep up the great work! :D

Nice continuation to the story, the points of view of each character is very good, it is coincidental that they are on the same flight without knowing. We see Kurtis having the same haunting dream as in chapter 2, and we also see Lara having a future vision-like dream of what may happen later on. I wonder how William will be involved in all of this. Looking forward to the next chapter :)

Don't worry about reviews. Focus on your work and make it the best it can be. Then the reviews will come. As far as making your work the best it can be, I'm guessing that English isn't your native language. It might be a good idea to get a beta-reader (see the toolbar at the top of the page) to check your grammar. Also, this chapter seems really important but it's a little confusing. Who is the 'I' in this chapter? It seems like Lara and Kurtis are narrating parts of this chapter but I can't tell who is who and where did this little brother come from? Clear those things up and you'll be in business.

Hey, nice two chapters, it was quite tense between Kurtis and William especially at the museum, but they soon start planning and working together to stop Eckhardt. You have set the scene up very well for the soon to be events of AOD when Lara got the phone call from Werner. It's interesting that William and Kurtis know about Werner too and they try to think of a plan to protect him from Eckhardt. Keep up the great work! :D

Hey, this is a good retrospective chapter of what happened two years prior to the story. You've written the final cutscene of the Last Revelation at the start very well, and the events after with the Shaman and Lara travelling good too :) It must be a coincidence for Kurtis to walk pass Croft Manor during that time, unknown to him that he would be meeting Lara later on. You've wrote Kurtis's viewpoints good too, with him feeling isolated, fighting demons and hiding place to place from Gunderson. Nice work! :D

Good chapter, it's quite different seeing a story where it features Kurtis having a brother, I wonder what William has that belongs to Lara and how they had met before :) You wrote Kurtis's dream well too, it's sort of in a way a vision of what may happen in the future. I wonder what will happen next, keep up the good work! :D

Hey, a very good start to the story :) You've shown Kurtis's past and viewpoint about avenging for his father very well in the first part, and the two year aftermath of The Last Revelation in Lara's point of view in the second part, I wonder what she had been doing in the two years since the event in Egypt. Nice effort, reading on to the next chapter! :D