Come one dude. What's next?

I thought to point out something. In some ancient cultures, men literally had to conquer their women. And I don't mean though sex. The couple would literally fight it out before being recognized as being married. So when you alluded the the Kyubi was defeat by men, you basically said that they married her.

Great story please update

Damn another good story with a good writer and no updates in years.

the story is really good. i hoped to read more chapter.

When fighting zabuza all of them should get hurt or worse and naruto is the only one left and he goes full jinchuriki on Zabuza and then kick his and Hakus ass! Ps this is from gunwolf if you wanna mention me! I’ve read this entire thing in two days and was hoping to get more so thanks for making me happy! Also try some more lemon . Ps you are an amazing writer and never feel less or feel bad ever need any help with writers block I got u message me at

Great story

Sorry to say but the last chapter was the best chapter. Not that it wasn't a good story till that point it just stood out. Sadly it ends since there is no updates since '14.

I like it.

This is a fantastic story it is so mature with just enough adventure, romance and comedy to make it perfect in every aspect...but WHY for F***S sake just stop it really annoys me when somebody writes a story and then it just never gets updated

As for tsunami being a nuke-nin, that's new. I don't think i have seen that in any other story so far

great wish there was more :)

really loving it so far great and fun to read been reading for about 4 hours so far

T.T I don't care if it ends a fight it's not cool to kick someone there unless they are a jerk an asshole or a rapist

I hope you pick this story back up. I like the way your characters interact.

This really deserves more reviews