I loved this

Please continue! I loved this so much! U write beautifully :)

adorable. hope you write more for these two soon!

OOO la la! Loved it! Ward insistign on still entering the cabin first, and Jemma desperately embarrassed and bumbling her way through. Adorable. I think you did a good job of capturing the affection and charged atmosphere between them.

You're really going to end it _there_?!

I'd love to see what happens once they're back on the Bus.

Love the pairing and this was cute, but I don't like that the story is completed, I want more!

This is awsome! please, go on. I want to know what happen with them in the plane, with the others around. And Ward's recovery! you write a wonderful story here

ha, "Make me a sandwich" i can so see her slapping him for that comment. Really great moments between Jemma and Ward.

So cute! Love it!

ooooh looking forward to seeing where this is going. You write very well :)

I love Fitzsimmons but I love Simmons with Ward too. Your fic is already off to a good start & I look forward to the update!

Great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next and to see how long it will be for the team to come and rescue them!