-reads chapter 1 and drinks some soda- aaah, I have to correct author kun, cool

Uh, hey Author kun, Yang was in Jr's club (in the Yellow trailer that I'm assuming you ment) looking for info on her mother, not her sister. I mean she lived with her sister. Why would she be looking for her? And the pic she showed Jr is clearly Raven (her mother), if you look close you can see Raven's Grimm mask

getting better and better as you continue to refine your technique

great story

I would of loved to see this continued

Ugh, I love this story so much and I was so sad when it was abandoned

... What the fuck? A vampire dog furry? That's rediculous why not go for something reasonable like a bat...ok maybe a bat's a bit cliche but still a fucking vampire dog furry!

I feel like this Harry is more like Nora than Harry

Chapter five and the story is just getting shittier. Seriously while I do look for some half good stories here this story is compete shit near the end.

excellent story so far

So will you be fixing this story now that RWBY has FIVE volumes? Also why didn't you have Harry try to figure out his Semblance.

... since when was this first person

Why are this still incomplete? You ended the story and don't plan to write more, so what's the point of keeping it open?

As for the story, I enjoyed the Hogwarts arc. I would be more comfortable if you called this crossover between 3 stories. Because there's nothing even close to this vampire in Potterverse. This is on the level of Hellsing, as in he's immortal.

Well that's a weird set-up. The biggest problem I have so far is the fight at the club. 1st season had cartoon level violence, you can do whatever you want, nobody dies or get lasting injuries. There was no blood baths and I doubt Goodwitch would've invited a person, who slaughtered 30 men and bled them dry, to a school.

The minute u brought in the Ears and tail it became in credibly stupid

...lol I love chaos