Reviews for Time is short
CrystalMapleLeaf chapter 12 . 2/22/2014
I need a hero! (Heroooo) XD Correction, everyone except Luna gets wasted XD Poor Luna, probibly sitting with Italy talking about pasta whilst Germany facepalmed at their stupidity... And then Romano comes and cusses her out for being with Italy! XD (That needs to happen eventualy... I'm giving you good ideas right here XD)
Guest chapter 1 . 2/17/2014
in my opinion Ocs aren't the best an Hetalia fanfic especially ones that aren't quite explained. But don't mind the hate sweet, i'm sure it's a great story once you continue
CrystalMapleLeaf chapter 11 . 2/16/2014
Ah, how alike Italy and Lunara are personality-wise... And on the same IQ level aswell... Well atleast most of the time! -Smirks- Atleast no one has gotten her angered past the point of no return yet! And that flashback... Who the crapola was that random guy? I just feel like Luna's gonna get stabbed in the back by him. Hard... Anyways good chapter! :D
InvaderCool chapter 10 . 2/13/2014
sorry for not loging into my profile to post this -_-" any way I'll be posting new storys now that I'm my breaking point of boredom again and able to start writing fan fics again! problebly creepy pasta stuff since I've become more intrested in that of late... maybe. I'm going to continue one of my other ones too so don't fret. Your loyal fan-InvaderCool
Fallen heavens chapter 11 . 2/15/2014
Cool that you make my character with France he is one of my favorite characters.
I had noticed Pippa doesn't really do much in the storyline and I started to believe you had forgotten her
CrystalMapleLeaf chapter 10 . 2/8/2014
So this is what you meant by a varriation of my idea! It turned out great, by the way. Maybe when America lets them out for the weekend Luna can meet Canada? /shot with a red bullet
CrystalMapleLeaf chapter 9 . 2/1/2014
Bad-ass Lunara and then annoying Lunara... and that is the basis of life itself, annoying the government scumbags! :D
CrystalMapleLeaf chapter 8 . 1/24/2014
XD I love how Lunara's disguise was an old granny! Typical Lunara, sleeping at a time like this...
CrystalMapleLeaf chapter 7 . 1/17/2014
:D Keep up the good work! Lunara's being pretty awesome, can't wait for the next chapter!
InvaderCool chapter 6 . 12/29/2013
poor timmy
InvaderCool chapter 5 . 12/10/2013
noooo not Italy! :(... anyway yaaaaay the countrys are in now :)
Solar Flare of Saturn chapter 5 . 12/10/2013
She is evil...
InvaderCool chapter 3 . 11/24/2013
Thank you w
Guest chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
PC idea isreal
Fallen heavens chapter 1 . 11/15/2013
hola! great idea! i will send in my oc for sure