god, this story is both lovely and heart wrecking at the same time I love and dread reading it. I live Kit I feel for her and would love to see more interaction between her and kit like when they were in the school where kit helps break her out of her memories.

I'm a sucker for fragile Maura and big protector Jane, so I really love ' and hate the way you write Maura in her flashbacks etc. I love it because I feel that there emotional and well written and respectful and hate it because I think its been too easy you put her through all that and she laughing and carrying on as if nothing matters solving cases. But when I start thinking that you pull something great out. I think your pacing is right because when I start thinking that your gonna simply do a 'and Maura talked to her therapist for a long time and bow she was Maura all fine and good story thing bamb you throw in a heart-wrenching scene that suddenly makes me remember that whilst things on the surface may appear fine the foundation still remains.

I see that you have not update for a while I hope this story is not dead and you are still posting, or rewriting

I hope you come back and finish this.

As I have to say, it is an okay place to leave it all, but as I have to say too, I would have loved to see how Donnie got his trial.

Oh please, oh please come back and finish this. The girls need closure. Maura needs to be strong in front of the asshole.
Needs to know she will be safe and that he will be locked up.
Maybe something might even happen to him in jail. Let the girls be happy.
Please and thank you.

It is a very good story, please update

Wow, intense take on the genre, very well done! Love Kit, hope to see more of her, and very intrigued by the prospect of the trial.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

Please need update. You have created such a great Rizzles universe. Must see how the trial goes, must see how things go with our lovely ladies as they go from friends, to partners, to lover, to wives.

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Well... I'm definitely glad I decide to read this. The tender moments are so emotinally charged (in a good way!). You are very good at this :)

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You have done such a great job with the girls. Maura IS Getting Stronger and wiih Jane to lock eyes with in court she can be brave. If the defense attorney is going to be a cocky pick and think he can intimate Maura, she should call him out and make him look into her eyes while she answers his questions. She should never break eye contact with him,if she has a streak of strength, and she should hold him accountable for trying to defend the ass hole.
Granted she might lose it after. Don should probably get cocky and show his true colors in court also but hopefully Maura stays strong. Jane should be sicky sweet and professional but piss him off so he digs himself deeper.
Please don't give up this story and please come back soon.
This is awesome and I hope you don't abandon them.
Thanks for sharing.

I love them so much 3 Your portrayal of these characters never ceases to amaze me. I’m in love with them being in love, and all of this is so supportive and AHHHHHHHH! I love it all.

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Great chapter. I loved it. Can hardly wait for the trial to begin. Look forward to the next chapter.