Overall, this is a great story so far. Though I have to disagree with the bacon comment. But, to each their own! You do a really good job with emotions, and I feel like the characters are really there, in the flesh, when I read this. I can see the story play out. Thank you for such an amazing story.

Cheers for the spoilers LoneNoble, love it when people put things that happen in reviews, especially when it's the ending, just from that and also reading the blurb/description or whatever it is, I now know the basic story line, I'd have liked to have discovered that by reading the story but yeah, thanks now I'll read the story knowing what's gonna happen in the end. Sorry writer (can't remember ur name at the time I wrote this) but I hate spoilers, I'm sure ur story will be great

well, I must say that I like this alternative ending much better than the original one

wow, I just skipped a lot of chapter here.. it's a lovely story but I just couldn't quite settled with the way the original story ended

This story was amazing, I think I enjoyed Alternative A and B endings, but I found the main cannon wasn't particularly satisfying, it seemed like a betrayal of thora's character almost when she died and hiccup instantly got with astrid. I much prefer your alternative endings.

I loved this so much, I'd really enjoy a sequel story to either of the alternatives, I know you wrote "snotlouts bride" but I want another story about Thora, and she died in the cannon that follows. I wonder if you ever find the time, if you could make a sequel for either of the alternative endings. Thank you for this story none the less, it was highly entertaining.

Oh and as a son of the waves, I highly approve of Eire tribe's portrayal. Britannia did it better, Britannia rules the waves ;P

Love it so far

by gods i love your taste in movies, i have been going through your stories one by one. i was introduced to your stories by how to view your dragons and the recommendations of toothless golfer, i love your movie references to monty python and the princess bride, i have not nearly read all of your stories, none of them have let me down yet, i'm not sure if this has been included yet but if not i think it would be cool to see them raiding a fortress, (maybe dragon hunters?) an just have a cow come flying over. i'm not reviewing every chapter, or even every story, but the longer stories and chapter i have something to say about i will leave a review to

Read this more tha once. Love your work.

I am re reading this again. Just wondering, I know you done two alternate endings to this story. I was wondering if you could do an ongoing of the second alternate ending. I don’t know for sure if Hiccup’s mother is really died in your story or the second ending of it. In the second movie that it was found out that she was alive. I want to see Thora and Hiccup’s mother to meet. Provided that Hiccup’s mother was mistaken for dead.

I know a lord of the rings reference when I read one

NO. NOOOOOOOOO. NONONONNONONONONONONONONONOOOOOOOOOOO. O. O. O. O. O. OOOOOOOOOOO. NOOO! PLEASE NO. THIS HAS. TO BE. A NIGHTMARE. HICCUP'S JUST HAVING A NIGHTMARE RIGHT?!

Oh dear! This is a twist I wasn't expecting...

Honestly, I was surprised Astrid hadn't run away long before this point. This route should be interesting.

Okay, I was totally wrong, I couldn't handle this. I had to take a break for sometime before I had the courage to face this again (mostly because of Astrid). And now this happens D:. I started liking the idea of these two. Firsts the miscarriage and now this. Will Hiccup ever get happiness? :(

Okay, now I'm really freaking out! Snotlout is the nephew of the chief of Berk, why can't he marry the niece of the chief of the Meatheads?

I don't really know who I feel sorrier for, Astrid or Thora.