Nice cant wait for the next chapter,its nice to see you have not given up.

I love this story it's long and it has lots of detail and your so neat and precise I love it please continue making more chapters,please.

Lovin story form start to finish keep it up it nice to see a shouen protag in Ecchi series like this plus he American and a Gentleman.

I hope you get to return to return to the Crimson Phantom Akame Ga Kill series some day soon because I really liked your writing in that one and that Doya survived in it. I like to see the story progress and how the Echoes may end up appearing in Akame's world and reck havoc and see how the Crimson Phantom OC rewrites the fate of the civil war while fighting to protect it from beings who are god like and probably destroyed planets before. I really like the Crimson Phantom I hope you one day return to that story. I can imagine him just knocking Esdeath out cold with just a slap of his hand.

Great chapter, I heard that there are new Girls in Senran Kagura so I gotta ask: can you please give our dear Chris ALL the Girls even the new ones?

Can you continue the Akame Ga Kill the Crimson Phantom series please?

So far I love how this breaks all of the Rom-Com Anime tropes, and just makes the Male Protagonist too innocent and likeable to be (predictably) labelled a perv-to-be-beaten niché by the girls (the title's already taken anyway), and just caring enough to be considered realistic in this situation.
Taking a series with a majority female cast like this, and skewering it enough with something typical (yet still interesting enough under the right circumstances) makes this a must-read for anyone who looks at it "raw", and thinks: "When is any one of them ever going to admit that they're lesbians?"
The story of the Male-Protagonist being some kind of cursed shinobi pulled from an unlikely place, and destined to fight the main villain under the forced arms of fate just makes me wish for more!
Good Luck with this story, I hope to see more, and please don't pull him in any of those clichéd situations where a girl needs to find a reason to call him a perv, and comically beat him under that "double standards" bullshit (seen it once, seen them all, it's monotonous).

Good chapter and welcome back!

It's interesting that this American (I think he is?) OC is getting a guardian animal spirit of kitsune.

Though it makes me wonder if you know that there's two people that already usea kitsune as their guardian animal?

Also, why are you giving your OC a harem of 30 girls?

That's excessive and I fear each of the 30 (or close to) girls won't have an equal amount of development in their relationship with your American (I still don't know if this is correct. lol) OC as the story keeps progressing.

This is a nice update, I really like how original the story is made instead of a mix up of various anime like scenes and stories.
And the japanese lines and explanation really gives a nice feel, I don't really know if it's for a native reaction or from a sentimental reason, but I really like how you added and explained the japanese lines as well.
I hope you will still continue the stories update in the future.
Thank you for writing and posting your original stories.
It's really interesting to read.

Seriously ? 92 positive reviews and just a negative one for... this ?
- Chris is a bad OC, he's empty, not likeable, Gary Sue, cliché as hell and sometimes irritating. I'm pretty sure that Chris is your name...
- The game's characters aren't respected (the games make interesting portraits of them and you, you just turn them into harem... shame on you...).
- The romance is one of the worst I've never seen, the girls fall in love for... nothing !
- The plot is ridiculous, not interesting (it's just a series of cliché harem situation) and full of inconsistencies (that guy has been found in the forest, and the day later, he has more than 10 games consoles... do you see the issue ?).
- The writing style is horrible ("gomenasai (sorry)", are you serious ?! It looks like a shitty fansub...).

Sorry, but even if it's not the worst Senran Kagura fanfiction (at least, it's not porn), that is still bad.

Nice to see you continuing the story and now it looks like Chris is attracting Homura’s team and his spirit guardian. But what was that nightmare at the end? Something tells me that whatever it was, we’re about to find out. See you in the next chapter.

man about time this updated, glad to see you are alive and well for the most part.

Glad to see your still writing can't wait for more

I love pls continue dis story man it is intersting of what will happen next pls continue it