Well, another Tera Online fanfic joins this site. Awesome!

First off, I would like to thank you for your contribution to this section. Its good to have you here and hope that you enjoy your stay.

Now on to the review itself. This would be relatively short, however, hopefully it'll be just as encouraging and helpful in your future work.

Alright, lets start with the length. Its rather lacking, but since its only the first chapter it can be ignored. I do advise that you increase it to at least 2k minimum in a few chapters... or as soon as you're able to. Usually that'll be enough to sate most readers lol.

Dialogue. Same as the length, this just needs more interactions between characters and the minor ones (NPCs, OCs, etc.) I would shut up about this since its you probably have it already planned, but I just wanted to point this out. Readers are drawn into fics even more when dialogue are involved.

Details. Its surprisingly pretty good. It paints a relatively clear image in my and improves my reading experience. Keep it up. Just don't overdo it lol, sometimes simplicity is the best for most fics.

I would like to say more, but I think this should be enough for now. This needs a little more development before I truly gets started with the review.

Thanks for the read and update soon! Good luck.