i really like this and i know you probably won't, but i still hope you will decide to continue this story.

"I've made you some food. Before rejecting it, please keep in mind that you'll need a lot more strength for your next escape attempt."

hehehe

To the nice person who started this story,

Finish this delightful story or i will find you and feed you 34 millgrams of c4. (just joking)please finsh it.

where are you...finish this story...please...best alias fic ever created...love sark to death...give him some justice...being bob was so lame...come back PLEASE

WOW! Really, what a great story.

All the other stories I have read about Sark's past were so different from what you created. It was truly orginial.

My favourite chapter was Sydney's daydream. It was really well crafted, and it was such as shame it was just a dream.

I liked how you managed to weave in Rambaldi into your story.

I hope you finish this story one day. It would be a real shame if you don't. I will cross-my-fingers and wait.

Thank you.

Lisa :)

This story is so good, I can't believe you stopped writing! I hope you haven't given up on it, but it seems like you have since it's been almost 3 years since your last update. Anyway, I really hope you continue one day.

Please Please Please keep writing this is so good

you have gone so far in this story and it's so developed i wish you'd keep writing it's a sick story!

~MD6

okay! i think this story is quite excellent. The way that Sydney and Sark are personified makes them seem almost real! Well I hope that you get around to making them do something together (and not get interrupted or anything) but keep up the good work and keep updating! It makes me happy when you update! ~*~belleartiste~*~

hehe. That was kewly! HAHA! sydney and sark, then the parents.

"Sydney stared at the close door for a moment before staying anything. “You have very peculiar parents.

hehe. Irina is kewly! and smart! YAYA! stupid sloane. hehe! YAYA!

I just read your story and i really like it! Update please! It's been like 5 months! Please continue!

"You have very peculiar parents" HAHA that was great!

Please please please !

Update soon.

I just loved your story.

I like your sense of humour too.

Please do update the story soon,

I am so looking forward to what comes next.

A little confusing when you bounce from place to place, but a good story overall. I'd love to read more of this, but you'll have to update first!

I loved this chap. ya gotta update soon.

kasha (dru)