| Reviews for Oops I Did It Again! |
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Guest chapter 66 . 2/7/2017 This is the second time ive read this story and...i still love it |
fluffylover chapter 66 . 8/1/2016 Great story! I have been reading all 66 chapters straight for hours now. |
Aren Nagashima chapter 9 . 4/15/2016 Second Book I've Read Dealing With A Ducky and Weasel Reference. I Love You People. |
Sessho's Fangirl chapter 66 . 5/11/2015 That was the cutest ending ever! |
That Guy chapter 37 . 12/25/2014 Amazing. I love your brain. |
kyoanna chapter 38 . 12/22/2014 I suddenly feel the urge to get a sesshomaru plush and use it as a pillow... -.- if I come across one and cannot resist the urge to buy it I'm blaming you for the fact that I probably won't have enough for present shopping |
DragonClanMaster chapter 66 . 10/24/2014 it was a beautiful story. almost made me cry in the end. |
SKYSPRITE chapter 13 . 9/27/2014 Okay...I quit. It feels like every chapter has paragraphs missing. Like all I'm reading is one elongated summery for each chapter. It's so confusing. I can't take anymore. I made it to chapter 13 but I still don't see any improvement. I'm done. |
SKYSPRITE chapter 9 . 9/26/2014 Why do you omit conversations? It's confusing. If it's too hard for you to write a conversation in between the characters in your story that says a lot about what kind of author you are. And to me, personally, laziness and carelessness are horrible traits to have as a writer. Your also not just omitting conversations but also details, any and all details. Example: "She kept walking until she found a garden. It was beautiful." ...that's it. Nothing else. I'm not saying you have to describe everything but putting some detail wouldn't hurt you. And the time skips go hand and hand with the detail issue. Your readers have no time to bond to your character and story if in one paragraph a whole week passes. If you don't take your writing seriously then put a crack warning in the story summery. This is probably going to a fend you, I hope it does, because that means you at least care what others think of your writing. |
Le pettit Charlotte chapter 66 . 9/7/2014 i love it! is there going to be a sequel? say yes! \o/ |
Leafygreen16 chapter 66 . 8/31/2014 Awwww im going to miss this story, I loved it! :-) :-) :-) |
Insanity runs through my vains chapter 66 . 8/31/2014 Ohhhhh this was a perfect ending. I think a sequel would be good. But I don't think it really needs one. Now I have to find another story t wait anxiously on for the next update. That's how much I enjoyed this story. You updated three days before my birthday, which is September first. So I was happy. But I'm still a bit sad that it's over. But that's okay... I guess. |
LadyEllesmere chapter 66 . 8/30/2014 Awww |
Awesomenesss-sama chapter 66 . 8/30/2014 aaaaaaaand...it's over, whoopdie-friggin-do-do-birds, the story almost lost it's touch XD |
MirajaneDeathSeaker chapter 66 . 8/30/2014 daw, so fluffy, god damn it, kazumi's going to have a sesshoumary army ;) |