Oh! A mix of my two favorite fandoms! Thanks a lot and all the best!

Beautifully imagined and written!

A really great alternative to the original story! At least I like the role of Tina much more than the priestess :D And you even predicted writing on the palm! Great twist with confession, it's something everyone was waiting for but never got in the manga itself :)

Thank you for reminding me about this manga (TCP)! It's been a while since I re-read it :D Both Kyoko's and Ren's reactions are so genuine - and funny at that. Poor Yashiro!

Oh, this is a really nice one! Great job, Ren! I asked husband to buy personal things for me on several occasions and he never complained, so I assumed it was pretty normal. But respectable anyway!

Great job avoiding cliche of Ren kissing Kyoko under that mistletoe! And great work overall!

Funny and brilliant! :D

Hi there! I just powered through these one shots and I LOOOOOOVE THEM! You are such a good author thank you ever so much!

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magnifique! It's so beautiful!

Haha your Shou is actually likeable as I don't believe he saved Kyouko completely out of the goodness of his heart but at the end of the day he did do it so I have to give him that.

This would make a compelling side story. And if Kyouko ever found out what he did... I'm going off track. Sadly I don't think a lot of people would be interested in it. Thank you for taking the time to write it though. It was great!

The 'his acting is believable enough to be real' line made me chuckle. If only you knew Kyouko. The setup was conpletely believable and is pretty much something that would work to male her actually go with it. I would love to read this from Ren's POV. Nice job!

Aww man I'd hoped En would realise she loves him too but he's too damned dense! ;) Nicely done! :*

Other than the kiss this would have been a much better reveal for me. Honestly recent events in the manga have turned me off enough to make me drop it completely. Kyouko was herself but I found Ren/Kuon to be unlikeable. I read up to 207 and I'm not sure if I read that much. Luckily my current unfinished stories are AU. Though this AR would have worked as well. Haha that's why I'll keep my focus on creating my own characters.

Sorry for the rant. You've created quite a plausible scenario. I especially like your Kyouko and how she responded. I didn't see any glaring errors just a 'what' that should be 'that' in the last paragraph of the second scene and Kyouko says 'Tsugara' at the end of the third scene. Nicely done!

Oh that last line was gold and what most everyone was thinking when they saw that scene I'm certain of it! It was fun to see Kyouko keep slipping with her thoughts. And as a woman with small breasts (smaller than Kyouko's. Think Haruhi from OHSHC) that was quite a relatable scene. Well in any event I hope she got a little bit of relaxation.