I especially enjoyed Lara's tenderness at the beginning of the chapter. Kurtis has some comfort in her support at least. :) Mr. Nobody? xD A very cool name for sure! ;D Hopefully Kurtis' sister is really alive, and still can be saved. Nice! ;)

Finally I've found some time to look at the story again! I still need to catch up with the whole thing, but this chapter was really good! :O I liked the suspense, as well as the unclear ending of the chapter. I feel so sorry for Karen. I'm hoping for some kind of a miracle... :( Well done! ;)

Ohhh I didn't expect that twist at the end there, this chapter was certainly filled with action and stealthy moments from the characters at the start. I couldn't believe what happened to Karen though...But at least Lara and Kurtis got their own back at Karel. Karel was definitely in character here, it reminded me so much at the end of AOD. Good cliffhanger at the end too, I will keep an eye out for the next chapter, nice work as usual :)

Interesting update, it sounds like everything is going according to Karel's plan so far after seeing what he said at the end there despite Lara and Kurtis having already sneaked into the castle. I wonder what recollections would have been written in the diary from Kurtis's grandmother that they found earlier and if it could play a part in this story. Furthermore from the sound of things, Karel is making Boaz's brother carry on her research into the next generation for him, again makes me wonder what further role he may play in this story :) Good work! :D

That Karel is a bastard! But I'm glad Kurtis and Karen were able to find Lara :) I hope they give Karel what he deserves. Nice story!

Nice chapter, I can't believe what happened to Lindie :( But I suppose Karel had to do it so Lara would immediately open the mysterious box, very tense moment and you wrote that scene well. I'm glad that Karen and Kurtis had managed to get to both Lara and Lindie to rescue them, and now the revelation about the dagger has been revealed from Karen I wonder how they'll get there...Hmmm curious :P Great work as usual, can't wait to find out what happens next :)

An intriguing chapter, Kurtis's encounter with the ghost was good, I wonder what the truth is behind that dagger, I'm sure when Kurtis and Karen have time they will figure it out. It was interesting that Karen started using her abilities in this chapter too, like the ability to go invisible to hide from Karel's mercenaries when they were searching the chamber. Poor Lara though being trapped in the cell, she was quite emotional thinking of Kurtis and how he was, unknown to her whether he had been caught by Karel or not. I wonder how she will figure out the puzzle behind the box or if she can find some way of escaping with Lindie too. Good work, reading on...

Hey, sorry for the late review but here it is :) An intense chapter, there was a lot of twists and turns in the chamber in order to find the resting place of the spear. Karen didn't take the news lightly about how she was related to Karel but it certainly helped our heroes progress further by opening the sealed doors. Now Karel has caught up with them I wonder how long till he finds Kurtis and Karen, as well as the spear artefact too. Reading on... :)

Good chapter, the story is progressing well as the trio delve deeper into the tomb where the spear was last recorded to be seen. The parts of the manuscript about how Simon took the very same path as them was very interesting, especially when someone from the Lux Veritatis got involved in hiding the spear too. Reading on... :)

Hey, interesting chapter, Karel certainly leaves a trail of death every time people cross him and his plans, but hopefully our heroes will be able to stop him and his evil ways. It was great to see Kurtis's sister introduced in this chapter, especially saving Lara's life in that crucial moment. Now that they know where the spear is I wonder if they will have a difficult time obtaining it, hmmm have to find out in the next chapter :P Great job, keep up the good work! :)

Hey, an interesting chapter. Kurtis definitely would have done anything to save/revive Lara's life, I was surprised at what happened as Bibiana went through with her destiny and selfless act. The story is progressing well, full of drama and emotion which you describe very nicely. I wonder what will happen next, keep up the great work! :D

What a cliff-hanger! :O :O :O I seriously hope it won't be too late!... Update soon! Good job! ;)

OMG he died?! That was a shock to me. I mean, I always wanted TRAOD's ending to be different, that she found him in time and she could help him... OK; I guess it's not the end, if not where are those many chapters coming from? Hehe. Will keep reading.

Hey! A good chapter you have written, it was full of action and very tense, especially at the end that was unexpected! :D This also reminded me a bit of Angel Of Darkness too, the lines Karel says too are very similar to what he says in the game :) Just need to watch out for spelling and grammar but other than that a great effort, and I'm looking forward to see what happens next, nice work! :D

Hey another good chapter, both Lara and Kurtis are discovering more about their roles as the General and Amazonian and it was a coincidence that the lady at the desk of the hotel was the keeper of truths. The story is progressing well, just need to watch out for spelling and grammar, but again really good work here. Can't wait to see what happens next after you left Lara to make her decision, I wonder what she will say :)