What a great read!

Awesome start! Just be aware of typos and missing words. Also some sentences seemed to be word awkwardly or as though you were having trouble with the wordage. All in all bravo!

Love your writing. Hope all is well. I have read most of you stories. Like them. Please. Continue :)

Great smut - you described futz & Olivia perfectfully. I've asked other writers to wright about her kipnapping, which you did however, I wanted someone to write how she was really treated in that cage. You know they would have felt up on her, Gus rubbing-getting his feel when taking her to the bathroom and Ian rubbing or fingering her in that bathroom when he said you are a pretty lil thing & fingering her when she was reading the prop. You are a great smut writter. Not sure if you want to try this but it's up to you..I'm just asking.

now thats how an apology should be delivered.

LOve it but if she was sore how could she let fitz do that to her?

Oh fucking shit. Yes. Fucking yes. Oh my god. My pussy is so wet. Fitz is so fucking hot and your writing has gotten me all hot and horny. Can't wait to read more of the chapters.

So, I've just discovered your writing. And I must say that I do enjoy reading it. I noticed you said you aren't from America in one of the A/Ns on another story I was reading and I thought maybe I could add a bit of constructive criticism. It may not do any good, but I'm a creative writing major and I have noticed some technical "errors" I guess. The main thing I wanted to point out is that exclamation marks actually shouldn't be used in dialogue. I just learned this myself. But apparently my professors say that no one literally speaks in exclamation marks, if that makes any sense. Also, sometimes in dialogue you forget to put the comma before the end quotation. For example "Im sorry," he said...something like that. That's all I really wanted to point out. Hopefully, I wasn't offensive in this review. That was not my intention.

Loved all these one shot would love for you to do more as scandal sucks right now.. Would love more of married Olitz or when he was shot :)

As a future chapter I would love if a sex tape is released of them.

#Superb
I love ur writing and storylines are amazing. Please please continue!

as luck would have it I'm dragging my hubby to jazz concert tomorrow night that he's not quite excited about, i wish i was as courageous to pull off a stunt like a night at the opera, however ihave a few cool sexy experiences with my hubby maybe you use one as inspiration
I told my husband that i never had sex in a car, which is true, so he once decided to show me how exciting that location coukd be, so lets think about an outrageous locale for liv and fitz to grt in on..., interesting locations!

I loved the story, very believable

Well, I have no words...this was soooo HOT! Wouldn't it be great to throw out all the scripts on the TV show where we have nothing and replace them with your episodes between Fitz and Liv? So much better! Thank you. I hope you continue...I love the humor in their passion, their lust and when they make love...

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! It was the most erotic, lustful, passionate, playful imagery I could have had with thee two...I smiled, I laughed, and go so turned on...amazing how HOT this was. Every chapter is better than the last. You are amazing!