I really like this one

I don't know why people these days tell other people to die. And I don't understand why they didn't give any critics, they just flame out, telling how they hate people like a crazy drunk person. I really admire how you write, it's beautiful and just give an emotional touch. I just love the idea of keeping Theodore's naivety and innocence. Since he's just a little boy and acts like one, I think it's a great that you make him think about 'love' in this story.

Again, I kept wondering why people are such jerks. But it's okay. Let's ignore them. I experienced much more worst than you even though I'm still emotionally unstable and still immature (people say it's because I'm 12). This is a wonderful work, great job :)

Aww this is precious! I love it!

I always wondered what she saw in him myself. Now I know. Good story.

Please make a lot of people's wishes come true and kill yourself :)

Stop writing stories u faggot

I don't understand how you wrote this.
You and your sister don't have a heart or compassion. I saw your and Bratette's little "arguments" and you seem to hate him or something. Bratette especially seems to loathe him. May I ask why?
Good story btw.

This was incredibly adorable, and spot on I think for Theodore and Eleanor's thinking about their relationship.

I love how you wrote Theodore thinking about What Eleanor said to him :)

It was good [:

I think my heart just stopped.

That can only mean one thing!

I'VE BEEN EXPOSED TO SOMETHING AWESOMELY CUTE! OH GOD I LOVED THIS. Nothing to complicated, but something that really goes in to why these two are head-over-heels for each other! Yet another definite favorite! I'm actually quite envious now. :P Oh well, keep writing!

KRS, Out!

This is too cute! I'm glad you wrote a Theonor, they really are so unappreciated. You did a great job at portraying Theodore and Eleanor's relationship. :)

Aww, such an adorable Theodore and Eleanor story! I love these two, they're adorable together.

I liked Theodore's point of view of falling in love. You portrayed his innocent and naive character really well. I liked the added reference from "Theodore and Juliet" to show an example of Theodore's limited knowledge of love (though his feelings for Juliet were more like a crush anyway).

The whole short story was so sweet, as was both Theodore and Eleanor's points of view. I love to read more of these kinds of stories.

I have to say, this was adorable. A lot of people never write TheodoreXEleanor much these days, and its pretty sad. They're a very cute couple in AATC. I'm glad you did this story, let's me know some people still care about them :) Good story