This was one of the best Olicity future stories I have read so far. It was very heartwarming to see that they are still as loving after the years together with 3 kids. Your ability to spin a story is very remarkable! Reading this in 2020 and season 7 (2019) of Arrow has them having a daughter. I really miss the series, but your Olicity HEA stories are the best! Thanks.

I don't suppose there is any way u could write about the moment breana finds out about olivers time of the island and about felicity and Oliver talking to her about it. Any write about the other two kids reactions too

So loved this finally goodness in their life brought tears to my eyes.

i love this

I honestly don't want to say except... Well done for creating this example of perfection.

Beautiful!

Loved it!

Just... Really, really, really great. Very satisfying as an ending to their story. (Or maybe just somewhere in the middle (I think you promised matching wheelchairs ;) ) but no pressure)

T totally enjoyed the story :) . I like olicity with their family...so sute 3

Awww so cute !

Wonderful story! I love how you write all of your Queen family. I found u under someone elses favs and i can see why. Your ability to drawn complete complex character make us love them in a one shot - it's Awesome. I will be looking (hoping!) for more stories by you. I wish this was a book or series!
thanks for sharing

This is so wonderfully sweet. I'm glad that Oliver doesn't go cave-bear over his daughter dating. Whenever stories have that, it always just strikes me as paternalistic and and incredibly anti-feminist. Great writing!

"AWWWWWWWWW" this was me the whole time. oh god just when i thought the fluffy sweetness of the first oneshot was enough you write this follow up and its even better! This was so cute and funny, I loved the big personalities each of their children had, (Robbie and his energetic, ice cream obsessed self, Grace and her blunt mouth perfect for death threats and "ew old people kissing" I could not stop laughing . I think Grace is my fave lol. and Breanna who knows what she wants and isn't afraid to put herself out there. I loved it) the family moments of eating ice cream and watching tv, the look into Oliver and Felicity's first date and the cuteness of their daughter's first date. I really loved how even though Oliver was not comfortable with Breanna dating, he wasn't possessive and overbearing or rude. Thanks for writing it like that. I loved the part where he thought about his baby girl loving him unconditionally, never being afraid of his scars and later finding out how those scars got there, her crying and just loving him even more. That's where i started tearing up a bit honestly.

everything about this fic was perfect ughhh sooo good.

So beautiful

Very much so his best ever choice.