Oh! 18 found 16!

Frightening beginning. Happy ending.
Great chapter.

Damn that's intense. A change in 18's thoughts, 17 is dead, Gohan and Trunks just barely survived. This story is really well done so far. I can't wait to see what happens next.

AMAZING!

Good story so far
Hoping for a realistic G/18 at this point, it would be a first and it seems like a good setup for two jaded tragic people to learn perspective

Hey, just read all this story and have to say Its one of the better DBZ mirai fics out there. congratulations even if you decided to discontinue it.

so is it actually abandoned

not gonna lie kinda upset that trunks gets to train with the z warriors now and gohan had to go to 10 yrs by himself

as soon as goku and vegeta got out of the golden oozaru form they were supr sayain fours i would like to see gohan as a ssj4 but its way too early

i dont think killing korin and knocking his tower down would bring the lookout down because i dont think they are connected

Good read I love the fact that future gohan actually survived this altercation, he's my favourite character in the whole of the dragon Ball series , I'm guessing he's yours to.

I really like what you've done with the senzu theory
I feel someone of ssj2 caliber, or mastered ssj2 caliber would be able to take on the full brunt of senzu without exploding and all
Am I right in assuming that Gohan is going to transform to a raging mindless Oozaru and try destroying earth as the ultimate irony

... why didnt 13 absorb 14 and 15's parts to become super 13?

... Popo and his teleporting carpet?... Why didnt he teleport to save Piccolo?

... what happened to Piccolo goin to the lookout to get healed and use the Dragon Balls?!... why didnt Piccolo use the Solar Flare if he was familiar with the Multiform?