There are few kiss scenes that I have found on this site that make me feel like THAT. The whole chapter was well-written, portrayed their emotions and the loops of their minds brilliantly, and had a fabulous kiss scene to boot. Definitely a favorite!

Loved it !

Great.

This was so lovely, and I'm sure we all wish and yet don't wish this had happened instead of 3x11. What's so wonderful is that even though this is so short, it has that slow-burn feel to it, and that's all thanks to your writing. Everything is so palpable and passionate and I only wish it was longer.

AW Great job!

Just wanted to take a moment to let you know how lovely this story is and how much I enjoyed it. I love how you captured not only Killian and Emma's steamy chemisty, but also how they understand and need each other. They've both been hurt and betrayed and left alone in the past and see a chance to finally have love and peace in each other. This was lovely - and I'm so glad I got a chance to read it.

I loved it!

nice, I like it.

that was so fucking beautiful i cant.

This was so beautiful! Please write more CS because you have such a talent for getting into these characters' heads! Xx

Eeeeeiiiiiiiiiii. I finally managed to stop myself from obsessively checking to see if you'd continued this and then BOOM, here you are. What a gorgeous addition to an already perfect story. Love how you write these two, and yes, the sexy times were fabulous but the banter and internal dialogues were just wonderful. A gazillion gold stars for you. :)

Definitely the best M rated fanfiction I have ever read (not only Captain Swan). Totally felt the intensity of the whole moment. Keep on writing, it's really good. :)

Aww, I totally loved it. It was hot and cute at the same time. Thanks for sharing

This was so hot and beautiful!
Thanks!

Hooray! Will there be more to the story? What would Killian's job in Storybrooke be? ;)