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This is Good! Though I'd like to ask do you update this every other year?

How powerful is Naruto in this fanfic? I mean what powers does he have like kekkai Genkai.

A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story

Update soon please please please please

nice start...

they are Toads not brogs by the way

Yeah I kind of lost all interest in this story when I saw Sakura and Madara were somehow still alive. It went from potentially good to terrible in a single chapter

Nice job on this story. You managed to merge the two very well. I can't wait to see how it goes. You're not making Zeref be Madara though are you, or is Zeref now Sakura's kid? Yeah I'm betting the second option. Well hope to see the update soon.

from what I can tell from this first chapter this ISN'T a TRUE crossover you're taking away pretty much EVERYTHING that has to do with Naruto such as Chakra and the tailed beasts so he's pretty much just an OC in the Fairy Tail world the same as if I were to go an create a story about Naruto where I have him meet a boy with Pink Hair that's really good with fire nature chakra named Natsu who DOESN'T have Igneel sealed inside him or even ever met Igneel

Taking his powers away and reducing his age? I had high hopes for this fic...

When will Naruto wake up? Please update

Dammit, just get to the present already! Who cares about the past? And Mavis using Chakra? Really?

i think that zeref and natsu are sakura sons
that would make sense because natsu is dead and zeref is evil

was this santa from the librarians if so thats amazing