| Reviews for The Things That Matter |
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anthonymosca27 chapter 1 . 5/17/2019 You're right about one thing the ending of the Assassin's Creed the Rise of Black Flag was tragic but in order for him to realize and with great tragedy comes great acts of kindness and good with Mary death propelled him to join the assassins they continue the fight for her memories and that's why her death was necessary to make Edward can we realize the more important things out there than money and wealth the fight for cause and to believe in something worth fighting for only then do you become stronger when you have something worth fighting for |
PlatinumNib chapter 1 . 7/31/2017 THANK YOU! THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS, MY HEART NEEDED MENDING AND CLOSURE! |
Reality check chapter 3 . 11/9/2016 You did a good job with the story may I make a suggestion for a second story call what if Edward Kenway survived the assassination attempt by the Temple of mercenaries what if scenario would might be interested in scenario just started putting it up also have you thought about the crossover between Assassin's Creed Syndicate Assassin's Creed Black Flag or time-travel story that have a scar on her meeting is Grandfather Connor Kenway just thought I'd give you a heads up thanks and good job with the story I thanks again |
Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2016 Amazing great job |
JessieLee chapter 3 . 8/10/2015 These chapters are beautiful. I love where this is going, you have a way with words. Hope to see more of your work. Awesome job! |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/6/2015 Just thanks. Very nice! |
Trev69ar15 chapter 3 . 12/31/2014 You should really keep writing it's interesting |
BwayKate44 chapter 1 . 5/29/2014 I really love how this chapter starts out and I love your writing. I just don't think that they'd have sex so soon after she's just woken up from being so ill and close to death. I'd imagine she would be too weak to even want to have sex and I don't think Edward would even think about having sex with her so soon either. Tender kisses and snuggling seem more fitting here. It's a beautiful scene you've set up that I think would be more believable if it stayed focused on the things they never got to say to each other but now have the chance to. With that being said, I'm excited to read more! You're a really good writer! |
D.E.J chapter 3 . 4/28/2014 I enjoyed it hope you will update soon. Is Edward a member of the assassins? And what about the Mary's child? Is Mary's friend Anne B. sill around? Thank you |
HevaBeanXD chapter 1 . 4/18/2014 This is perfect! exactly how I imagine these two, glad you're back and can't wait for more |
Ana chapter 2 . 3/6/2014 THIS. WAS. FRIKIN. AMAZING. *・゚・*:.。..。.:*・'(*゚゚*)'・*:.。. .。.:*・゚・* |
Alienmatt9910 chapter 2 . 2/27/2014 please update soon. it is an awesome story |
KatieKaboom713 chapter 2 . 2/8/2014 This story seems to have great potential! I hope you are continuing it! |
devin.conway.16 chapter 2 . 2/1/2014 Hope to read more of this story soon! |
He-Who-Has-Too-Many-Hyphens chapter 2 . 1/6/2014 Her kid? She has one you know, and I'm pretty sure that she would think of that before sex. And since it was pain in the stomach area after childbirth I'm assuming something went wrong with the birth, so I don't believe she would be up for sex anyway. It's not that bad though, bit too lovey dovey for my taste but not bad. |