This is damn good!

I love how you made Apollo a jerk cuz I hate him and I love Persephone and Hades together!

Best. Fanfiction. Ever! Seriously, I've never read anything better! I love coming back to this story and reading it from the beginning over and over again!
Lotsof love 3

i absolutely loved this story. it was just so enjoyable.

Loved this!

up at 4:00am in the morning reading this when I should be sleeping for school.

This is an adorable chapter! I like your story much better than the other versions of it! -JHS.

What happened I have been waiting for ages! Please update
This is an amazing story please update. Jeep up the GREAT work!

Okay. Omg. I don't even know how I arrived here on this... What you call this? Hahaha. Your story was really really greaaaat.

Hello again! I just finished reading all 14 chapters
Great story (I really liked the torture scene (; is that wrong?)
I just think that...well...easy on the "scenes!" (I skimmed them sorry) Geez
Anyway, great job. I enjoyed it
Now looking for till death do we part! Looking forward to reading it!
(; Megan the Lunar out

Okay I'm only on chapter 5 but I had to review.
Btw this will b long
Hi! Can I just say how AWESOME this story is?! My favorite story from Greek mythology is Persephone and Hades and you write it perfectly. I happen to b writing a book based off it myself and u have better ideas than me! (Don't worry I won't use yours ideas (: ) i
If you think about it Beauty and Beast is the French version of Persephone and Hades. Or is Persephone and Hades the Greek version of Beauty and the Beast? MIND BLOWN! Lol
Ok, I just want to ask can I taser Apollo? Please?!
Oh my gosh. He lights up the sky with the sun but I would light him up with a police weapon! Lol!
Okay back on track. Your story is great. Never stop writing (especially if it's your passion)
Anyway I'll keep reading and I'll definitely review later
(; Megan the Lunar out!

Spelling errors? Myth irregularities or what ever, none of that matters, I give you 10 stars! Amazing, exciting, I was sooo happy when I finished reading that I read it again. Real work of art and a true love story for romantic suckers like me :)

P.S. I know you said you take criticism well, but I can't just make it up since I don't have any.

I loved this! Simply exquisite writing. A few spelling mistakes, you said that Thanatos would be spending the next few years in Tartarus at one point, but I give it 4 and a half stars. One fourth taken off for mistakes, one fourth for being a bit more than PG-13. But, overall, outstanding story. Not one that I could have written. I can start a story better than J. K. Rowling, building suspense and leaving you in the dark, wanting more, but then I think of something else, and I forget entirely what the story is about, or even that I'm writing it! Astonishing work, really, and the Thanatos/Makaria thing was really great. (There are two spellings: Makaria and Macaria. Either is correct.)
Again, loved the story, the plot, subplot, whole shebang.
~Anne Onymous~

I love it but the tease is so koral

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! *Squeals so loudly Aphrodite is put to shame* SO CUTE! SO KAWAII!