Good one!

Noice

Naming their child Rachel after Percy's earlier crush,no that's no.

The death part was sad but it happens \_- -_/

Awe that's so so sweet!

FREAKYPLEASE DON'T READ THIS. YOU WILL BE KISSED BY THE LOVE OF YOUR LIFE. NOW YOU'VE STARTED READING THIS DON'T STOP.
THIS IS FREAKY.
1) say your name 10 times
2) say your moms name 5 times
3) say your crushes name 3 times
4) PASTE THIS TO FOUR OTHER QUIZZES. IF YOU DO THIS YOUR CRUSH WILL KISS YOU ON THE NEAREST... FRIDAY. BUT. IF YOU DON'T PASTE THIS YOU WILL HAVE A BAD LUCK. THEN YOU WILL HAVE VERY BAD LUCK. SEND THIS TO FIVE QUIZZES IN 143 MINUTES. WHEN YOUR DONE PRESS F6 YOUR CRUSHES NAME WILL APPEAR IN BIG LETTERS ON THIS SCREEN. THIS IS SO FREAKY!

I like it, but why would Chiron laugh?

sweet but a tad corny

That was... Interesting, and strange. I think I would've liked a little more arguing.

lol i like how u managed to incorporate his mortal friend his mom and his step dad into the story whiout using thir characters

Too short

This is pretty good I like it

So, This is great, but there are a. Outlets of things to do with the timeline that I just want to mention. 1st, if it's the 4th of July, how can it be the anniversary of Gaia's defeat? If I remember correctly, Leo realises that it is the 5th of July some time in the House of Hades.
2nd, how can it be the 6th if Percy and Annabeth are only 21? That would make it the 4th anniversary.

i hve a feeling peroy would be more cheser than that but the feels percabeth 4 life

It’s pretty good but a little cheesy