Ah. Clearly, Older Jack had to die out there would be quite a bit of a multidimensional mess going on.

Ah. So here's this universe's Jack. I was wondering when he was going to turn up.

You're messing with my mind, mate. Were Jack's memories tampered with by Pitch? What is going on?

That was... weird.

Read this story when it was originally being written, don't think I kept up though. Just getting back into this and went looking for it, hoping it'd been finished. Sad to see it hasn't been but if you need a break then you need one. Just really hoping you come back to this. Really want Jack to get a happy ending. hope they can keep him safe from their worlds Pitch. Would they ever find out he's not their Jack? That Pitch killed their version?

Please continue writing story- want to know what happens in the end with the Jack brothers
Oh, an idea you could do is have two different names next time do two Jacks. Like one could be Jokul Frosti and other is Jack Frost or can shorten one of their names as Jay so don’t have to say Jack said to Jack - just an idea. Other than that- I love your story, continue to keep up the good work!

I just looooove your fanfic! Especially the part where you put the two ages that were ideas of how old he was on each Jack - amazing! You are a wonderful author! Keep up the good work!

Its ok... i was pretty into the story but thats cool.

well... I am biased, because I love this story and honestly can't even with it because of how great it is. but fanfics are as much for the writers enjoyment as they are for the readers , so if you are not feeling into it and you don't want to write anymore, don't! take a break for a month or two. get some new ideas. make a new story. write a one shot. take a vacation. get into a new fandom. really! if you don't want to write something, the quality is going to go down, and you'll just end up hating it. you can always take a break, then come back later. we'll be waiting for you
also, I love, absolutely love, the idea and world for this fic. would it be alright with you if I wrote something similar(the same idea of alternate universes where pitch shoves jack into a better world) I have some ideas that I could do with world building, character development, etc. but if not, that's totally ok to. I mean, it is your idea!
Hoping your writer's block is cured soon!

No!

HOW DARE YOU! YOU NEED TO UPDATE AGAIN!

AW SNAP!

I really hope you continue this at some point. One thing I think would be cool further down the line is for the good guardians to encounter the evil guardians, and get revenge.

Update plz!

If you do not feel like continuing at the present moment, you should definitely take a break! You shouldn’t force yourself if you do not want to! Although, all of us would wish that you would come back and finish it someday, there is no point if you are not comfortable with continuing it anymore. It is your story after all and I would like to say that we would feel bad if you were to force yourself to continue just for us. Hope you enjoy your break and find more inspiration/motivation to continue writing!:))
(Sorry for the reeeaaaallly late review. Hope this still helps though!)