great story

Woe, I wanted to let you now I have read the entire story for this, and its squeal, and I have to say this is one of the best by far Startrek Spook/oc stories I have read.

I really enjoyed reading this xxx thanks

Do you think you will ever make the Body vs Soul story you mentioned? Cuz I stumbled onto this story again and reread it and would love to see an update!

I loved it!

I like your OC, Cora. I think you were imaginative with her history and put a nice emphasis on her struggles in the in the academy. I liked your portrayal of the blossoming relationship between her and Spock, as well.

One criticism I have is your use of ellipses; you use far too many and often it's before an emotion. It makes me feel like you are unsure that you are using the correct word. It's very jarring to the reader because it causes an unnecessary pause and I found myself skimming the last chapters. I noticed in this first chapter it's the same way. If you ever revise/edit that story and this one I would definitely recommend getting rid of most, if not all, of them that are present.

I was wondering how the conflict with Nero would be resolved in the last story and I'm glad you didn't change it.

can I call bs on the sudden change of heart for the oc?! In one of the earliest chapters Cora stated she wasn't ready to move forward in a bond with Spock. Then a few days later she has a suddenly asks why they haven't bonded yet?!

Body vs Soul! Body vs Soul! Please don't leave us hanging. the third movie has been out for a while now. I keep rereading this story, and waiting for a long time for yippy to make a third. Body vs Soul! Body vs Soul!

Hey! Loved both of these stories! Have you posted Body vs. Soul yet? It sounds amazing and I was really hoping to see Spock and Cora free Hestia. Thanks for writing this! It's super.
~Kit~

I had a look for the sequel to this one but couldn't find it on your account. I really enjoyed this and the previous story so I hope you do get around to writing the third!

fabulous story

I need moreeeeeeeee

When are you writing the next story?! I can't wait! Please start it soon, these are some of my favorite stories.

I really love this series! and am hoping that you will write another part for Spock/Cora. I would like to know if you are going to write that Khan/OC story that you mentioned in your A/N ?

I have to say, Spock and Cora's relationship is far more natural and believable than him and Uhura's in the movie. The fit together well and I cold never really buy into Spock/Uhura, especially in the first movie.